List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I had' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như 'to to'. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn như 'save time' thay vì 'save my times'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and also saves me time and money.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ như 'you can you can'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ được liên kết mạch lạc. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because knowing all the tasks and the time available helps me manage everything more easily.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'topamin' (dopamine). Bạn nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh câu phức tạp không mạch lạc. Hãy giải thích rõ lý do và dùng ví dụ cụ thể.

Ejemplo: I think some people avoid making lists because they prefer activities that make them feel happy and comfortable. Making lists can feel like a difficult task, so they tend to skip it.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều/số ít như 'my hands is' nên là 'my hands are'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và tự nhiên.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper because in summer my hands get sweaty, which makes it hard to use a touchscreen. Therefore, writing on paper is easier for me.

× Yes I had, I make a list when I shop because it helps me to to ensure that I don't forget anythings and it helps me to save my times and my money too.

✓ Yes, I do. I make a list when I shop because it helps me to ensure that I don't forget anything and it helps me to save my time and my money too.

The phrase 'Yes I had' is incorrect because the question is about a habitual action, so the present tense 'Yes, I do' is appropriate. 'Anythings' is incorrect; the correct singular form is 'anything'. 'My times' should be 'my time' because 'time' is uncountable here. Also, the repeated 'to' is a typographical error and should be corrected.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work because when you are knowing about all things you need to do and how much time you have with all of that information you can you can handle things much easier.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because when you know about all the things you need to do and how much time you have, with all of that information you can handle things much more easily.

The phrase 'when you are knowing' is incorrect; 'know' is a stative verb and should be in simple present tense. 'All things' should be 'all the things' for specificity. The phrase 'much easier' should be 'much more easily' because 'easily' is an adverb modifying 'handle'. The repeated 'you can' is redundant and should be removed.

× I think it is because of human nature. People just want to do things that have them gain more topamin and feel comfortable and delighted when people dealing. When people are dealing with struggle, they feel hard and ignore the step of making this.

✓ I think it is because of human nature. People just want to do things that help them gain more dopamine and feel comfortable and delighted when dealing with others. When people are struggling, they feel it is hard and ignore the step of making lists.

The phrase 'have them gain' is incorrect; 'help them gain' is correct. 'Topamin' is a misspelling of 'dopamine'. 'When people dealing' is incomplete; it should be 'when dealing with others'. 'Feel hard' is incorrect; it should be 'feel it is hard'. The phrase 'ignore the step of making this' is vague; specifying 'making lists' clarifies the meaning.

× I would totally make it on paper because my hands is wet, my hand is sweaty in the summer, and since everything's using touchscreen to active to act, it's much easier to use on paper for me.

✓ I would totally make it on paper because my hands are wet, my hand is sweaty in the summer, and since everything uses a touchscreen to activate, it's much easier for me to use paper.

'My hands is' is incorrect; it should be 'my hands are' to agree in number. 'Everything's using touchscreen to active to act' is incorrect; it should be 'everything uses a touchscreen to activate'. The phrase 'it's much easier to use on paper for me' is awkward; 'it's much easier for me to use paper' is clearer.