List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答がやや冗長で、"it reminds me"が繰り返されています。より自然で効果的な表現にするために、繰り返しを避け、具体的な理由を一文で簡潔に述べることを意識しましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and keeps my spending under control.

Sugerencia: 文法的な誤りがあり、意味がやや不明瞭です。より明確に理由を述べ、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。また、接続詞を使って論理的に説明しましょう。

Ejemplo: I don't make a list for my work because I feel restricted if I have to follow a strict plan, so I prefer to be flexible.

Sugerencia: 内容が不明瞭で、"parents"はおそらく"plans"の誤りと思われます。文法と語彙の誤りを修正し、理由を具体的かつ論理的に述べる練習をしましょう。

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find them ineffective and feel more motivated when working freely without strict plans. They believe choosing tasks based on interest leads to better results.

Sugerencia: 意味が不明瞭で、文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べることを心がけ、簡潔で自然な表現を使いましょう。

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper because using my phone often distracts me from my work.

× Yes, I usually make a list before going to the store because it reminds me it reminds me what I need to buy and also it saves my budget.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list before going to the store because it reminds me what I need to buy and also it saves my budget.

The phrase 'it reminds me it reminds me' is a repetition error. Removing the repeated phrase improves clarity and correctness.

× I don't make a list for my work because I when I make a list I need to follow exactly on my plan and as I said, I cannot do anything.

✓ I don't make a list for my work because when I make a list, I need to follow my plan exactly and, as I said, I cannot do anything else.

The sentence has misplaced words and lacks clarity. Removing the extra 'I' and repositioning 'exactly' after 'follow' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× I don't make a list for my work because I when I make a list I need to follow exactly on my plan and as I said, I cannot do anything.

✓ I don't make a list for my work because when I make a list, I need to follow my plan exactly and, as I said, I cannot do anything else.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'follow'. The correct phrase is 'follow my plan' without 'on'.

× Because sometimes it doesn't work. I think some people feel motivation when they work without any parents.

✓ Because sometimes it doesn't work. I think some people feel motivated when they work without any pressure.

The word 'parents' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'pressure'. Also, 'feel motivation' should be 'feel motivated' to correctly use the adjective form.

× I think people choose their tasks based on their interest is more effective.

✓ I think people choosing their tasks based on their interests is more effective.

The original sentence lacks proper structure. Changing 'choose' to 'choosing' and adding 'interests' pluralizes the noun to match the context and improves sentence flow.

× I pay for it too late, at least down on paper because if I use one it always disturb my work so that's why I prefer to make a list on paper.

✓ I prefer to write it down on paper because if I use my phone, it always disturbs my work, so that's why I prefer to make a list on paper.

The phrase 'pay for it too late, at least down on paper' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'write it down on paper'. Also, 'disturb' should be 'disturbs' to agree with singular subject 'it'.