List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but a bit short and could be more natural by adding a reason and linking words. Try to avoid redundancy and improve fluency by expanding your response slightly.

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I can easily remember the items I need. However, if I have many things to buy, I might make one to stay organized.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid filler words. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because, as a dentist, I need to keep track of my patients and their appointments. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important tasks.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical errors and is somewhat unclear. Try to use correct sentence structure and provide a more detailed explanation with linking words.

Ejemplo: Some people might not like making lists because they believe they can remember everything they need. Additionally, they may find lists unnecessary or time-consuming.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but could be improved by adding more details and using linking words to explain your preference more naturally.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's always with me, so I can easily add or check items anytime. Moreover, digital lists are convenient since I don't have to worry about losing paper notes.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work because I'm a dentist and I need uh, at least about patient umm, when they come with me and uh.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because I'm a dentist and I need, uh, at least about patients, umm, when they come to me and uh.

The word 'patient' should be plural 'patients' because it refers to more than one person. Using the singular form here is incorrect when talking about multiple individuals. To improve, always match the noun number with the context indicating singular or plural.

× Maybe some people think they don't need list because they can remember what do you what they want.

✓ Maybe some people think they don't need a list because they can remember what they want.

The sentence has incorrect word order and missing article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'what do you what they want' is incorrect; it should be 'what they want'. The sentence structure should be simplified to maintain clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone always is with me.

✓ I think I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is always with me.

The adverb 'always' should be placed before the main verb 'is' in this sentence. The original placement 'my phone always is with me' is unnatural in English. Correct adverb placement improves sentence fluency and correctness.