List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use more natural and grammatically correct expressions. Avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to improve coherence. For example, instead of repeating 'save my money and time', you can say 'to save both time and money efficiently.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to save both time and money. This way, I can quickly find what I need without browsing aimlessly and avoid unnecessary purchases.

Sugerencia: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Avoid vague phrases like 'I'm not really appreciating this idea.'

Ejemplo: I don't usually make lists for my work, but I believe they can be helpful. For instance, lists can help you manage deadlines and complete tasks on time.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. Avoid repetition and be more specific in your explanation.

Ejemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by them. They prefer to shop freely and buy whatever catches their interest without following a list.

Sugerencia: Use clearer and more natural expressions. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases like 'just buy a press.' Use linking words to explain your preference logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and easier to edit than using paper and pen.

× I think some people doesn't like to restrictive of shopping lists so they like to go and buy themselves a new product and and buy everything what they like without going through through a list.

✓ I think some people don't like to be restricted by shopping lists so they like to go and buy themselves a new product and buy everything they like without going through a list.

The subject 'some people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'to restrictive' is incorrect; it should be 'to be restricted' to form the correct passive infinitive. The phrase 'buy everything what they like' is incorrect; 'what' should be omitted to say 'buy everything they like'. Additionally, the repeated 'and' and 'through' are errors and should be corrected.

× Sometimes I like to go upon a list to find it easily and fast, not to browse when I go there and waste my money and time.

✓ Sometimes I like to follow a list to find things easily and quickly, not to browse when I go there and waste my money and time.

The preposition 'upon' is incorrectly used with 'go'; the correct phrase is 'follow a list'. Also, 'find it' is vague; 'find things' is clearer. 'Fast' as an adverb should be 'quickly' for proper adverbial form.

× So I prefer to make a list before going to shopping to save my money and time.

✓ So I prefer to make a list before going shopping to save my money and time.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping' without 'to'.

× Really I don't make a list for my work, but sometimes you need a list to to avoid the deadlines and you finish your work before the deadlines.

✓ Really, I don't make a list for my work, but sometimes you need a list to avoid deadlines and finish your work before them.

The repeated 'to' is an error. Also, 'the deadlines' is repeated unnecessarily; 'deadlines' without 'the' is more natural here. Using 'them' avoids repetition of 'deadlines'.

× Really, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's easy to to make it correct without taking a pen, just buy a press.

✓ Really, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's easy to make it correctly without taking a pen, just by a press.

The repeated 'to' is an error. 'Make it correct' should be 'make it correctly' to use the adverb form. 'Buy a press' is incorrect; it should be 'by a press' meaning by pressing a button.