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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

I seldom make a shop because as a high student I have to face the homogeneous mountain every day, so I seldom go shopping. Thus I never made a list.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Of course, because there is many things to do every day, so I have to list them clearly to finish it. Well, always it works, but sometimes if I can't do it, it doesn't work.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

Umm SENFJIA always make things clearly to finish it well, so I can't understand people who don't like making this.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

As a high school student, I seldom have my own time to play with my phone, so I always prefer to make a list on paper so I can see my tasks clearly.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.0Fluidez y coherencia: 6.0Pronunciación: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso léxico: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Puntuación: 40.0

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议简化句子结构,直接回答问题,并提供具体原因。避免使用不恰当的词汇,如“homogeneous mountain”。

Ejemplo: I rarely make a shopping list because I don't go shopping often due to my busy school schedule.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Puntuación: 55.0

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多,建议注意主谓一致和时态使用。回答应更连贯,使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete. It usually helps me stay organized, although sometimes I can't finish everything.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Puntuación: 30.0

Sugerencia: 回答不相关且表达不清,建议直接回答问题,给出合理原因,并使用连贯的句子。

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Puntuación: 65.0

Sugerencia: 回答较为自然,但可以更简洁并使用连接词使表达更流畅。建议补充具体原因。

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper because I can see my tasks clearly, and I don't spend much time on my phone.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× Of course, because there is many things to do every day, so I have to list them clearly to finish it.

Of course, because there are many things to do every day, so I have to list them clearly to finish them.

这里的主语是复数形式"things",谓语动词应使用复数形式"are",而不是单数形式"is"。此外,代词"it"应与复数名词"things"保持一致,改为"them"。

Third person singular issue

× Umm SENFJIA always make things clearly to finish it well, so I can't understand people who don't like making this.

Umm SENFJIA always makes things clearly to finish them well, so I can't understand people who don't like making this.

主语"SENFJIA"是第三人称单数,谓语动词应加-s,变为"makes"。代词"it"应与复数名词"things"保持一致,改为"them"。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I seldom make a shop because as a high student I have to face the homogeneous mountain every day, so I seldom go shopping.

I seldom go shopping because as a high school student I have to face the homogeneous mountain every day, so I seldom go shopping.

短语"make a shop"不符合英语习惯,正确表达应为"go shopping"。此外,"high student"应为"high school student"。

Incorrect adverb placement

× Well, always it works, but sometimes if I can't do it, it doesn't work.

Well, it always works, but sometimes if I can't do it, it doesn't work.

副词"always"应放在主语和谓语之间,正确顺序为"it always works"。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Of course, because there is many things to do every day, so I have to list them clearly to finish it.

Of course, because there are many things to do every day, so I have to list them clearly to finish them.

代词"it"指代复数名词"things",应使用复数代词"them"。

Vocabulario

HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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