List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'keep me save money' nên là 'help me save money'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại ý. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me keep track of what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items. This way, I can focus on purchasing only the important things.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'uh' và nói rõ ràng hơn. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Ngoài ra, hãy sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I also have a lot of work for today' thành 'I have a lot of work today'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work using a tracking app. It helps me remember important tasks and manage my busy schedule effectively.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'spend time to take it' nên là 'spend time making one'. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Some people might dislike making lists because they prefer to remember tasks themselves and enjoy working freely without restrictions.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có lỗi từ vựng như 'check my glove of the day' không rõ nghĩa, có thể bạn muốn nói 'goals of the day'. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc với liên từ để kết nối ý.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me, and I can easily update my daily goals and tasks using a tracking app.

× I always make a list when I shop because it helps me to keep track of the items I need to buy and also keep me save money to buy unnecessary things.

✓ I always make a list when I shop because it helps me to keep track of the items I need to buy and also helps me save money by avoiding unnecessary things.

The phrase 'keep me save money' is incorrect. The verb 'keep' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'save' without 'to'. Also, 'to buy unnecessary things' is better expressed as 'by avoiding unnecessary things' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I also can buy the important things if I want.

✓ I can also buy the important things if I want.

The modal verb 'can' should be placed before the adverb 'also' for correct word order in English.

× I can check it in my tracking app and I don't forget the important work I have to do.

✓ I can check it on my tracking app and I don't forget the important work I have to do.

The correct preposition to use with 'check' and 'app' is 'on' rather than 'in' because apps are accessed 'on' devices.

× I don't forget the important work I have to do.

✓ I don't forget the important work I have to do.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present tense and does not require correction.

× Maybe they don't want to spend time to take it, take note of it so they they can remember everything they have to do.

✓ Maybe they don't want to spend time taking notes so they can remember everything they have to do.

The phrase 'spend time to take it, take note of it' is incorrect. The correct form is 'spend time taking notes' because 'spend time' is followed by a gerund (-ing form). Also, 'take note of it' is better expressed as 'taking notes' for clarity.

× Maybe they don't want to spend time to take it, take note of it so they they can remember everything they have to do.

✓ Maybe they don't want to spend time taking notes so they can remember everything they have to do.

The repeated pronoun 'they they' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'they'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone always with me and I can use the tracking app to check my glove of the day or update the list of work.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is always with me and I can use the tracking app to check my goals of the day or update the list of work.

The phrase 'my phone always with me' is missing the verb 'is'. Also, 'check my glove of the day' seems to be a typo and should be 'check my goals of the day' to make sense in context.