List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain why you do it, using words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need. Without a list, I often forget items, so it makes my shopping more efficient.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but could be clearer and more natural. Avoid phrases like 'I'm trying all day'. Instead, use a clear topic sentence and explain the benefits of making lists at work with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. As a result, I can complete more tasks efficiently than without a list.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' and try to give a more specific reason. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a clear opinion or example.

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and avoid strict plans. For instance, I enjoy planning my day because it helps me stay focused.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer linking words and more natural phrasing. Also, avoid repeating 'I see every time' and use smoother expressions.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because I can see them on my desk and easily track my completed and pending tasks. However, sometimes I use my phone, depending on the situation.

× I'm trying all day to make a list because by this way I'm more productive and I make more tasks than without a list.

✓ I've been trying all day to make a list because this way I'm more productive and I complete more tasks than without a list.

The original sentence uses 'I'm trying all day' which is incorrect for expressing an action continuing over a period up to now. The present perfect continuous tense 'I've been trying' is appropriate here to indicate ongoing effort. Also, 'make more tasks' is incorrect; 'complete more tasks' is the correct collocation.

× I don't remember what I want in supermarkets, so.

✓ I don't remember what I want at supermarkets, so.

The preposition 'in' is less appropriate when referring to supermarkets in general. 'At' is commonly used to indicate location for shopping places. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'so.' which is incomplete; however, the correction focuses on the preposition as per instructions.

× this is umm depend on person type.

✓ this depends on the person type.

The phrase 'this is umm depend' is grammatically incorrect. The verb should agree with the subject 'this' and be in the present tense 'depends'. Also, 'person type' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the type of person.

× I prefer to make a list on a paper because by this way I see every time on my desk this paper and check what tasks I have done and what is in pipeline.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because this way I see the paper on my desk every time and check which tasks I have done and which are in the pipeline.

The article 'a' before 'paper' is incorrect when referring to paper as a material or medium; it should be omitted. Also, 'by this way' is better as 'this way'. 'This paper' is better as 'the paper' to specify the particular paper. 'What is in pipeline' should be 'which are in the pipeline' for clarity and correctness.