List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy by combining ideas into one clear sentence. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the important and essential items I need for my daily needs.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me keep track of tasks I have completed and those I still need to do, ensuring I don't forget any important duties.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas more clearly and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect reasons logically.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they are not used to writing down their tasks, or they rely on their strong memory to remember what needs to be done.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains awkward phrasing and redundancy. Try to express your preference clearly and use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make my lists on my phone because it is simple to save items and I can easily access them with just one tap.

× Yes, I do make a list since it has always been a habit of me buying anything.

✓ Yes, I do make a list since it has always been a habit of mine to buy anything.

The phrase 'a habit of me buying' is incorrect because 'me' should be replaced with the possessive pronoun 'mine' to correctly indicate possession. Also, 'buying' should be in the infinitive form 'to buy' after 'habit of mine.'

× Note down anything which is important and essential things for my daily needs or I also note down.

✓ I note down anything which is important and essential for my daily needs.

The original sentence is fragmented and redundant. 'Note down anything which is important and essential things' is incorrect because 'anything' and 'things' are redundant. Also, the phrase 'or I also note down' is incomplete and unclear. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct.

× Yes I do make a list for my work because by doing this I don't forget that which work I have to done or which work I already have done in the past time.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work because by doing this I don't forget which work I have to do or which work I have already done in the past.

The phrase 'which work I have to done' is incorrect; it should be 'which work I have to do' because 'have to' is followed by the base form of the verb. Also, 'already have done in the past time' is redundant; 'have already done in the past' is sufficient.

× It also helped me to remember my upcoming works that.

✓ It also helps me to remember my upcoming work.

The verb 'helped' is in the past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate. Also, 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is uncountable in this context. The phrase 'that' at the end is incomplete and unnecessary.

× In my opinion, some people don't like making list just because they don't have a habit of it writing down their special work or their needs to be done.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists just because they don't have the habit of writing down their special work or tasks to be done.

The phrase 'making list' should be plural 'making lists.' The phrase 'habit of it writing down' is incorrect; it should be 'habit of writing down.' Also, 'their needs to be done' is awkward; 'tasks to be done' is clearer.

× Or the other reason can be that some people don't do it just because they have strong memory or.

✓ Another reason can be that some people don't do it because they have a strong memory.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'or.' 'Or the other reason' is awkward; 'Another reason' is better. 'Strong memory' should be preceded by 'a.' The sentence is corrected for clarity and completeness.

× I always prefer to make my list on my phone rather than noting down on the paper because it is as simple as that to save anything in my phone and we can and I can easily find out just with the one tab over the phone.

✓ I always prefer to make my list on my phone rather than noting it down on paper because it is simple to save anything on my phone, and I can easily find it with just one tap on the phone.

The phrase 'noting down on the paper' should be 'noting it down on paper.' 'As simple as that' is informal and awkward; 'simple' suffices. 'Save anything in my phone' should be 'save anything on my phone.' 'We can and I can' is redundant; 'I can' is sufficient. 'Find out just with the one tab over the phone' is incorrect; 'find it with just one tap on the phone' is correct.