List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use correct verb tenses and sentence structures to make your answer more natural and clear. For example, say "I sometimes make a list when I go shopping." Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes make a list when I go shopping to help me remember what I need.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and complete your thoughts.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently. For example, two days ago, I made a list to plan my meetings and deadlines.

Sugerencia: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. For example, say "Some people don't like making lists because they dislike being organized, and they feel it takes too much time."

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous, and they think making lists takes too much time.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and verb forms. Use linking words to compare options clearly. For example, "I prefer making lists on paper because I find it easier, but sometimes I use my phone since it's more convenient."

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because I find it easier to write, but sometimes I use my phone since it's more convenient and portable.

× When I am going to the shop I am making sometimes listing for my shopping.

✓ When I go to the shop, I sometimes make a list for my shopping.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'am making' and 'listing' where simple present tense and noun form are needed. 'Am making' suggests an ongoing action which is not appropriate here; 'listing' should be 'a list' as a noun. The corrected sentence uses simple present tense 'go' and the noun 'list' correctly.

× Yes, uh, I don't uh, when I'm going to the shop, I'm trying to make some lists, uh, and make myself comfort.

✓ Yes, uh, I don't, uh, but when I'm going to the shop, I try to make some lists, uh, and make myself comfortable.

The phrase 'make myself comfort' is incorrect; it should be 'make myself comfortable' using the adjective form. Also, 'I'm trying to make' is better as 'I try to make' to express habitual action. The correction improves verb form and adjective usage.

× For example, when I was going to the store 2 days ago, I.

✓ For example, when I went to the store 2 days ago, I...

The phrase 'was going' is past continuous but incomplete here; simple past 'went' is more appropriate to indicate a completed action in the past. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for tense.

× Oh, because there does not like to be organized and make their time more make their time more more take.

✓ Oh, because they do not like to be organized and make their time more efficient.

The original sentence misuses 'there does not like' which is incorrect. The correct subject pronoun 'they' should be used with 'do not like'. Also, the phrase 'make their time more make their time more more take' is unclear and corrected to 'make their time more efficient' for clarity and correctness.

× Oh to be honest, I like make listing on paper but sometimes I'm using my phone because it's more comfortable than paper.

✓ Oh, to be honest, I like making lists on paper but sometimes I use my phone because it's more comfortable than paper.

The phrase 'I like make listing' is incorrect; it should be 'I like making lists' using the gerund form. Also, 'I'm using my phone' is better as 'I use my phone' to express habitual action. The correction fixes verb form and plural noun usage.