List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, clarify what you mean by 'people' and correct grammar mistakes.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember essential items and prevents me from forgetting anything. For example, I list groceries and household supplies to ensure I buy everything I need.

Sugerencia: Focus on giving a clear and direct answer. Avoid hesitations and unclear words. Use linking words to explain why making lists for work is efficient. Keep your sentences concise and relevant.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work tasks because it helps me organise my day efficiently. For instance, I plan what to do in the morning and afternoon, which improves my productivity.

Sugerencia: Clarify your ideas and use correct vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence and explain reasons why some people dislike lists. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and feel it limits their spontaneity. Also, if they fail to complete the list, it can be discouraging, so they prefer to be more flexible with their plans.

Sugerencia: Make your answer clearer and more coherent. Start with a direct preference, then explain reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. For example, explain why paper helps you focus better than your phone.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone because writing by hand helps me organise my thoughts better. Also, using my phone can be distracting due to notifications, so paper is more effective for me.

× Actually I always make a list before I go to shopping becauses makes me remember this ND then make me don't forget anything and essential items for example people.

✓ Actually I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember things and then helps me not forget anything, including essential items, for example, people.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' should be followed by the gerund 'shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs clarity. Using 'helps me remember' and 'helps me not forget' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Actually I always make a list before I go to shopping becauses makes me remember this ND then make me don't forget anything and essential items for example people.

✓ Actually I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember things and then helps me not forget anything, including essential items, for example, people.

The sentence lacks the subject 'it' before 'makes me remember' and 'make me don't forget'. Pronouns must be used correctly to refer to the subject; here, 'it' refers to making a list. Also, 'make me don't forget' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me not forget' or 'prevents me from forgetting'.

× I'm pretty sure I will think clearly there time what I what I need.

✓ I'm pretty sure I will think clearly at that time about what I need.

The phrase 'there time' is incorrect; it should be 'at that time'. Also, 'what I what I need' is repetitive and ungrammatical. The sentence structure needs correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, Oh my, oh, sorry, library. I was thinking what would I do in the morning? So in the afternoon or in the evening, so. I always make list for my sorry.

✓ Yes, oh my, oh, sorry, library. I was thinking about what I would do in the morning, afternoon, or evening. So, I always make a list for my tasks.

The phrase 'thinking what would I do' is incorrect; it should be 'thinking about what I would do'. Also, 'make list for my sorry' is unclear and likely a misstatement; assuming 'tasks' or 'work' is intended. Prepositions and article usage need correction.

× I always make list for my sorry.

✓ I always make a list for my tasks.

The noun 'list' is countable and requires the indefinite article 'a' when singular. Also, 'my sorry' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; replacing with 'my tasks' makes the sentence meaningful.

× Some people don't like men, E Bigelow said, Finding it boring or it is useful and they fill it.

✓ Some people don't like making lists, saying they find it boring or not useful, and they avoid it.

The original sentence is unclear and contains pronoun misuse. 'Men, E Bigelow said' seems to be a mishearing. The pronouns 'it' and 'they' need clear antecedents. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun use.

× If they fail, the list can be rigid and take away the spontaneous, so there are days they don't like basically to face day.

✓ If they fail, the list can be rigid and take away spontaneity, so there are days when they don't like to face the day.

The phrase 'take away the spontaneous' is incorrect; 'spontaneity' is the correct noun. 'Basically to face day' is ungrammatical; it should be 'to face the day'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I prefer to make leaves on my paper or not on my phone because running down when I sing, dance, make me organize my source smoke nearly and for example by writing on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone because when I'm running around, singing, or dancing, it helps me organise my thoughts better; for example, writing on my phone...

The phrase 'make leaves on my paper' is incorrect; 'make lists on paper' is correct. 'Running down when I sing, dance' is unclear; likely intended 'running around'. 'Organise my source smoke nearly' is unclear; likely 'organise my thoughts more clearly'. Prepositions and word choice are corrected for clarity.

× I need to check my phones and I will very easy to distract if and for the notification so it.

✓ I need to check my phone, and I am very easily distracted by notifications, so...

'Phones' should be singular 'phone' unless multiple devices are meant. 'I will very easy to distract' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'I am very easily distracted'. The sentence is corrected for pronoun and verb usage.