List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answerは自然ですが、"keep track on"は不自然な表現です。"keep track of"を使い、文を簡潔にまとめるとより効果的です。また、"avoid buying unnecessary items"の部分を具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me keep track of what I need and prevents me from buying things I don't need, which saves money.

Sugerencia: 文法と表現に改善が必要です。"Most since I'm still a student"は不明瞭で、"I usually make a to-do list before studying or doing daily activities"のように明確にしましょう。また、"keep track on time"は"keep track of time"が正しいです。接続詞を使い文をつなげると自然になります。

Ejemplo: Since I'm still a student, I usually make a to-do list before studying and doing daily activities because it helps me keep track of time and tasks, which makes me more productive and motivated.

Sugerencia: 文が断片的でつながりが弱いです。"prefer having more freedom making lists"は不自然なので、"prefer more freedom and find lists restrictive"などに直しましょう。接続詞を使い、理由を明確に述べると良いです。

Ejemplo: Well, I believe some people prefer more freedom and find making lists stressful because they feel restricted by having to follow a strict plan.

Sugerencia: "keep tracking time"は不自然で、"keep track of tasks and time"が正しいです。"And I also tend to these things very often"は意味が不明瞭なので削除か修正が必要です。文をつなげて簡潔に答えましょう。

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone, especially using the Notes app, because I always have my phone with me, which makes it easier to keep track of tasks and stay organized.

× I usually make a list before I go shopping because it is easier to keep track on what I need to buy and avoid buying unnecessary items.

✓ I usually make a list before I go shopping because it is easier to keep track of what I need to buy and avoid buying unnecessary items.

The correct preposition to use with 'keep track' is 'of', not 'on'. Using 'on' is incorrect in this context. To improve, remember the fixed phrase 'keep track of' when referring to monitoring or remembering something.

× Most since I'm still a student, I do make it To Do List before I study.

✓ Since I'm still a student, I usually make a To-Do List before I study.

The original sentence has unclear structure and incorrect word order. 'Most since' is incorrect and 'do make it To Do List' is awkward. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses proper word order and article usage. To improve, ensure sentences have clear subject-verb-object order and use articles correctly.

× Oh, do daily activities.

✓ I also do daily activities.

The original sentence is a fragment without a subject. Adding 'I also' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct. To improve, always include a subject and verb to form a complete sentence.

× I believe that it is easier to keep track on time and what I need to do throughout the day.

✓ I believe that it is easier to keep track of time and what I need to do throughout the day.

Again, 'keep track' should be followed by 'of' not 'on'. Using 'on' is incorrect here. Remember to use 'keep track of' when referring to monitoring something.

× And it keeps me more productive and motivated.

✓ It keeps me more productive and motivated.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally discouraged in formal writing. Removing 'And' improves sentence flow and correctness. To improve, avoid beginning sentences with conjunctions unless stylistically intended.

× Well, I believe that some people would prefer having more freedom making lists.

✓ Well, I believe that some people would prefer having more freedom when making lists.

The phrase 'freedom making lists' is unclear and missing a preposition. Adding 'when' clarifies the meaning. To improve, use appropriate prepositions to connect ideas clearly.

× Might make people feel stressed or restrictive.

✓ It might make people feel stressed or restricted.

The original sentence lacks a subject and uses 'restrictive' incorrectly. Adding 'It' as subject and changing 'restrictive' to 'restricted' (an adjective describing feelings) corrects the sentence. To improve, ensure sentences have subjects and use adjectives appropriately.

× As if they need to follow a strict plan.

✓ As if they need to follow a strict plan.

This is a sentence fragment. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased. For example: 'This is as if they need to follow a strict plan.' To improve, avoid sentence fragments by ensuring each sentence has a subject and verb.

× I would prefer making a list on my phone, particularly on the Notes app since I usually have my phone around me.

✓ I would prefer making a list on my phone, particularly in the Notes app since I usually have my phone with me.

The correct preposition for apps is 'in' not 'on'. Also, 'around me' is better expressed as 'with me' when referring to carrying a phone. To improve, use 'in' for apps and 'with me' for possession or carrying items.

× And it is easier to keep tracking time and tasks and stay organized.

✓ And it is easier to keep track of time and tasks and stay organized.

The phrase 'keep tracking' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'keep track of'. To improve, use the fixed expression 'keep track of' when referring to monitoring something.

× And I also tend to these things very often.

✓ And I also tend to do these things very often.

The verb 'tend' requires an infinitive verb after it ('to do'). The original sentence is missing 'do'. To improve, remember that 'tend to' is followed by the base form of a verb.