List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains some unnatural expressions and grammatical errors. For example, "make a waste" should be "make a list." Also, try to use a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Please focus on using correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store to make sure I don't forget anything I need.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes and unnatural phrases such as "make a waste" and "so not do for get." Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid filler sounds like "uh" and "by yeah."

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a to-do list every day at work. It helps me remember important tasks and manage my time effectively.

Sugerencia: Your answer is vague and contains many hesitations and unclear phrases like "using a time on the earth" and "content of the wrist." Try to give a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid unnecessary pauses and filler words.

Ejemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because it takes time, and sometimes their plans change, so the list becomes useless.

Sugerencia: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. For example, "make a waste" should be "make a list," and "prevents from forgetting to take up" is unclear. Try to give a clear reason and use complete sentences with linking words.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and helps me avoid forgetting important tasks.

× I tried to make a waste when I go to shopping not to forget what I want to buy.

✓ I try to make a list when I go shopping so I don't forget what I want to buy.

The phrase 'make a waste' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. Also, 'go to shopping' should be 'go shopping' because 'shopping' is a gerund used without 'to' after 'go'. The verb tense should be present to match the habitual action.

× Yes. When I start to work, I make a waste. In the day like A to do list. Uh by yeah in my work almost everyday they a lot of task to the so not do for get the important things and.

✓ Yes. When I start work, I make a list. During the day, like a to-do list. At my work, almost every day, there are a lot of tasks, so I don't forget the important things.

Again, 'make a waste' should be 'make a list'. 'Start to work' is better as 'start work'. The sentence structure is fragmented and unclear; it needs to be rephrased for clarity and correct grammar. 'They a lot of task' should be 'there are a lot of tasks'. 'Not do for get' should be 'don't forget'.

× I'm not sure the specific reason, but. Uh, I think. Uhm, it a little bit. Uh, using a time on the earth, Sometimes, depending on the situation, the content of the wrist can be changed. So.

✓ I'm not sure of the specific reason, but I think it is a little bit of a waste of time. Sometimes, depending on the situation, the content of the list can change.

'It a little bit' is incomplete; it should be 'it is a little bit'. 'Using a time on the earth' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'a waste of time'. 'Content of the wrist' is a mishearing or typo for 'content of the list'. Pronouns and phrases need correction for clarity and correctness.

× I like make a list on my phone. The cause? Uh. By making a waste. On my phone. I can. It prevents from forgetting to. Take up. We.

✓ I like to make a list on my phone because by making a list on my phone, I can prevent forgetting things.

'I like make' should be 'I like to make' or 'I like making'. 'By making a waste' should be 'by making a list'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; it needs to be combined and clarified. 'It prevents from forgetting to take up we' is incorrect and unclear; corrected to 'I can prevent forgetting things'.