List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat jawaban lebih alami dengan menghindari kalimat yang membingungkan. Gunakan kalimat yang jelas dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan.

Ejemplo: I usually make a shopping list when my parents ask me to buy many items at the supermarket.

Sugerencia: Gunakan struktur kalimat yang lebih jelas dan hindari pengulangan yang tidak perlu. Jelaskan dengan kalimat yang teratur dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Ejemplo: Yes, making a list for my work really helps me stay organized. Although some days are difficult and I can't complete everything, having a list keeps me focused.

Sugerencia: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat jawaban lebih jelas dengan menghindari kalimat yang berbelit-belit. Jelaskan alasan dengan kalimat yang sederhana dan langsung.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember their tasks without writing them down. However, I prefer to make a list every day to stay organized.

Sugerencia: Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas. Jelaskan alasan dengan struktur yang baik dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because paper lists can get lost easily, but lists on my phone are saved and easy to access.

× Sometimes I make it always when my parents ordered me to buy a lot of things in supermarkets.

✓ Sometimes I always make it when my parents order me to buy a lot of things in supermarkets.

The modal verb 'ordered' is in the past tense, but the sentence context suggests a habitual action, so the present tense 'order' is appropriate. Also, 'make it always' is awkward; 'always make it' is the correct adverb placement.

× Sometimes I make it always when my parents ordered me to buy a lot of things in supermarkets.

✓ Sometimes I always make it when my parents order me to buy a lot of things in supermarkets.

The verb 'ordered' is in past tense but should be in present tense 'order' to indicate habitual action.

× At once, when I make always for what I'm gonna do today.

✓ At once, when I always make a list of what I'm going to do today.

The adverb 'always' should be placed before the verb 'make' for correct word order. Also, 'make always for' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list of'.

× And sometimes when you have a bad days, you will not, you don't achieve that.

✓ And sometimes when I have bad days, I don't achieve that.

The pronoun 'you' is inconsistent with the speaker's perspective; it should be 'I'. Also, 'a bad days' is incorrect; 'bad days' is plural without 'a'.

× And sometimes when you have a bad days, you will not, you don't achieve that.

✓ And sometimes when I have bad days, I don't achieve that.

The phrase 'a bad days' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'days'; it should be 'bad days' without 'a'.

× In my perspective, why some people don't like to making to make list in owning the fact that they think they are capable to not listen to not list that does not list what are they gonna do in that day.

✓ In my perspective, some people don't like making lists because they think they are capable of remembering what they are going to do that day without a list.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Don't like to making to make list' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like making lists'. 'Owning the fact' is incorrect; 'because' or 'since' is better. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× In my perspective, why some people don't like to making to make list in owning the fact that they think they are capable to not listen to not list that does not list what are they gonna do in that day.

✓ In my perspective, some people don't like making lists because they think they are capable of remembering what they are going to do that day without a list.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring to the general concept.

× I would rather to make a list on my phone rather than do other then in paper in owning the fact that if we make on the paper it will be gone in several times but somehow when make it on the phone it could be saved on the phone as a document.

✓ I would rather make a list on my phone rather than on paper because if we make it on paper, it can be lost after some time, but if we make it on the phone, it can be saved as a document.

The phrase 'would rather to make' is incorrect; 'would rather make' is correct. 'Do other then in paper' is incorrect; it should be 'rather than on paper'. 'In owning the fact' is incorrect; 'because' is better. 'Gone in several times' is unclear; 'lost after some time' is clearer.