List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating ideas and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organised and finish quickly. Without a list, I often forget what to buy, which makes shopping take longer.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid redundancy and be more concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning. It helps me keep track of my tasks because I can tick them off as I complete them, which allows me to focus on what to do next.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and fragmented. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas more clearly with linking words. Avoid short, incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because if they cannot complete all the tasks, they feel anxious about leaving boxes unchecked. Personally, I would also feel stressed if I left tasks unfinished.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid short, choppy sentences. Also, correct tense usage.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easier and more environmentally friendly. Since I use my phone most of the day, it's convenient to have my list there.

× I find it very convenient because every time I shop and I don't know what to look for.

✓ I find it very convenient because every time I shop, I don't know what to look for.

The original sentence contains an unnecessary conjunction 'and' that disrupts the sentence structure. Removing 'and' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Some people don't like making lists because.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'because' without completing the thought, resulting in a sentence fragment. Completing the sentence provides clarity and correct sentence structure.

× If, for example, they won't be able to make to do the tasks at hand, it won't be able to take the box.

✓ For example, if they are not able to complete the tasks at hand, they won't be able to tick the box.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect modal verb usage ('won't be able to make to do the tasks'). Rephrasing and correcting modal verb usage improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Then personally on my part, I would be very anxious.

✓ Personally, I would be very anxious.

The phrase 'Then personally on my part' is redundant and awkward. Simplifying to 'Personally' improves sentence clarity and structure.

× Because I would know that. I haven't done. The task at hand.

✓ Because I would know that I haven't done the task at hand.

The original sentence is fragmented into incomplete sentences. Combining them into one complete sentence corrects the sentence structure.

× I preferred to make a list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The question is about current preference, so present tense 'prefer' is appropriate instead of past tense 'preferred'.

× I believe that it would be easier and more environmental friendly.

✓ I believe that it would be easier and more environmentally friendly.

The adverb 'environmentally' should be used to modify the adjective 'friendly' instead of the adjective 'environmental' alone.