List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'sharp' thay vì 'shop', 'shot' thay vì 'shop', 'For instant' thay vì 'For instance', 'wondering' thay vì 'wandering'). Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chính tả để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có thể được rút gọn để tránh lặp từ và tăng tính hiệu quả.

Ejemplo: I don't shop often because I'm not very keen on it. However, when I do, I always make a list to save time and shop more efficiently. For instance, I can quickly find the items on my list without wandering around the store.

Sugerencia: Bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'war calendar or help' không rõ nghĩa, nên là 'Google Calendar helps'). Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng thì và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I used to be disorganized, so recently I started using Google Calendar to make lists for my work. It helps me stay organized and manage my time more efficiently.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc trình bày ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng câu đơn giản và đúng ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng các từ nối phù hợp để câu trả lời logic hơn.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because it takes time. Also, they believe they can remember tasks without writing them down. Moreover, making lists can sometimes be distracting.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'wool calendar' thay vì 'Google Calendar', 'beautiful' không phù hợp, 'convenience' nên là 'convenient'). Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm và chọn từ phù hợp với ngữ cảnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone using Google Calendar because it's more convenient. It can send me reminders, and I can access my schedule anytime and anywhere with internet access.

× However, whenever I do sharp, I usually make a list which helps me save a lot of time and shot more efficiently.

✓ However, whenever I do shopping, I usually make a list which helps me save a lot of time and shop more efficiently.

The word 'sharp' is incorrect here; the correct present participle form of the verb 'shop' is 'shopping'. This is a common mistake where the verb form is confused. Using 'shopping' correctly indicates the activity.

× For instant. I can quickly look for the items which is written on the list without wondering around a store thinking.

✓ For instance, I can quickly look for the items which are written on the list without wandering around a store thinking.

The phrase 'For instant' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'For instance'. Also, 'wondering' should be 'wandering' as it refers to moving around aimlessly. Additionally, 'which is written' should be 'which are written' to agree with the plural 'items'.

× I can quickly look for the items which is written on the list without wondering around a store thinking.

✓ I can quickly look for the items which are written on the list without wandering around a store thinking.

The subject 'items' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× I find myself quite disorganized and a bit lazy, so recently I started using Google Calendar to make a list for my work. Using war calendar or help helps me stay more organized and managed my time more efficiently.

✓ I find myself quite disorganized and a bit lazy, so recently I started using Google Calendar to make a list for my work. Using my calendar helps me stay more organized and manage my time more efficiently.

The phrase 'war calendar or help' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'my calendar helps'. Also, 'managed' should be 'manage' to match the present tense and parallel structure.

× To my way of thinking, some people don't really like making a list is because they fight.

✓ To my way of thinking, some people don't really like making a list because they find it difficult.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Is because they fight' is incorrect; it should be 'because they find it difficult' or a similar phrase. The verb 'fight' is not appropriate here.

× Making a list are quite time consuming and furthermore they can as they fight it easily easier to remember all the task without writing them down.

✓ Making a list is quite time-consuming and furthermore, they can find it easier to remember all the tasks without writing them down.

'Making a list' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'all the'.

× Further more like making a list can distract.

✓ Furthermore, liking making a list can be distracting.

'Further more' should be 'Furthermore'. The sentence structure is incorrect; 'like making a list can distract' is unclear. It should be 'liking making a list can be distracting' or similar.

× As I said before, I started using wool calendar which mean are beautiful to make a list on my phone because making a list on my phone can be a more convenience for me an it can it have some functions like as sending the reminders to me and I can access and my schedule anytime in any way with Internet skin.

✓ As I said before, I started using Google Calendar which is beautiful to make a list on my phone because making a list on my phone can be more convenient for me and it has some functions like sending reminders to me and I can access my schedule anytime and anywhere with internet connection.

There are multiple errors: 'wool calendar' should be 'Google Calendar'; 'mean are beautiful' is incorrect, should be 'which is beautiful'; 'a more convenience' should be 'more convenient'; 'an it can it have' should be 'and it has'; 'like as sending' should be 'like sending'; 'access and my schedule' should be 'access my schedule'; 'anytime in any way with Internet skin' should be 'anytime and anywhere with internet connection'. Pronouns and articles are misused and need correction.