List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I usually don't make a list when I shop, except when I buy groceries." Also, avoid filler words and unclear expressions like "4" and "Else other I don't make less."

Ejemplo: I usually don't make a list when I shop, except when I go grocery shopping. In that case, I find it helpful to write down what I need so I don't forget anything.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly. For example, say "I usually don't make a list for work because I prefer to handle tasks spontaneously." Also, avoid fragmented sentences and unclear words like "manage Ng" and "over well."

Ejemplo: I usually don't make a list for my work because I prefer to handle tasks spontaneously. I look at what needs to be done and do it without strict planning.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a full, coherent response with linking words. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they may not complete the tasks, which makes them feel frustrated. Therefore, they avoid making lists to prevent disappointment."

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they might not finish all the tasks, which can make them feel frustrated. So, they prefer not to make lists to avoid feeling upset.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use complete sentences and linking words. For example, "I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me, so I can check it anytime. In contrast, paper lists are not always accessible."

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me, so I can check it anytime. On the other hand, if I write a list on paper, I might not have it when I need it.

× Unless I have to go to shop for groceries.

✓ Unless I have to go shopping for groceries.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' when referring to the activity of shopping. 'Go shopping' is a fixed expression meaning to engage in shopping.

× It's the only case I make a list 4.

✓ It's the only case I make a list for.

The word '4' is a numeral used incorrectly here; it should be the preposition 'for' to indicate purpose. Using numerals instead of words in formal speech is incorrect.

× Else other I don't make less.

✓ Otherwise, I don't make lists.

The phrase 'Else other' is incorrect and unclear; 'Otherwise' is the correct adverb to contrast the previous statement. Also, 'less' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'lists'.

× My words spontaneously.

✓ I speak my words spontaneously.

The original sentence lacks a verb and proper subject-verb agreement. Adding 'I speak' clarifies the action and corrects the sentence structure.

× I looked at it and search for.

✓ I look at it and search for what I have to do.

The sentence mixes past tense 'looked' with present tense 'search' and is incomplete. Consistent present tense and completing the thought improves clarity.

× And then I do it without planning or manage Ng?

✓ And then I do it without planning or managing.

The word 'manage Ng' is a typo and should be 'managing' to correctly use the gerund form after 'without'.

× Just because I think manageing underlining is over well.

✓ Just because I think managing and underlining is overkill.

The word 'manageing' is misspelled; it should be 'managing'. Also, 'underlining' is unclear here and 'over well' is incorrect; 'overkill' is the correct expression meaning excessive.

× Because they actually. Probably don't. Make the work that in the list so they prefer.

✓ Because they probably don't do the work that is on the list, so they prefer not to make lists.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper verb forms and connectors. Combining the fragments and adding missing verbs improves clarity and grammar.

× Don't make lists so they don't feel upset or. Frustrated.

✓ They don't make lists so they don't feel upset or frustrated.

The sentence fragments need to be combined into a complete sentence with proper subject and verb agreement.

× Something like that, but I think it.

✓ Something like that, but I think differently.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'differently' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.

× I do prefer making less this on my phone.

✓ I do prefer making lists on my phone.

The word 'less' is a typo for 'lists', and 'this' is unnecessary. Correcting these makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× 'Cause your phone is always with you, so you can check it out at anytime and remember your list of you have forgot it.

✓ Because your phone is always with you, so you can check it out anytime and remember your list if you have forgotten it.

The sentence uses informal 'Cause' instead of 'Because', 'at anytime' should be 'anytime', and 'of you have forgot it' is incorrect; it should be 'if you have forgotten it' using the correct past participle form.

× But if you write it on the paper, you can't access the paper at any time.

✓ But if you write it on paper, you can't access it at any time.

The phrase 'on the paper' is less natural than 'on paper' in this context, and repeating 'the paper' is redundant; replacing the second with 'it' improves fluency.

× So if you want to remember what you have less.

✓ So if you want to remember what you have listed.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'listed' to indicate items written down. Correcting this clarifies the meaning.