List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding specific reasons. Avoid redundancy and incorrect grammar, such as 'I purchases' and 'I make our list'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I visit big stores like Costco or Walmart. This helps me remember all the items I need, especially since I sometimes forget things if I don't have a list.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence. Use proper sentence structure and avoid irrelevant information. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'yeah, yeah' and unclear references like 'Is it weighted in Hamilton?'. Use linking words to explain how making lists helps your work.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it helps me stay organized. For example, I prioritize tasks by listing what to do first, second, and third, which improves my productivity.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically. Use linking words to connect your points. Avoid vague phrases like 'no Mattingly's' and improve sentence structure. Provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

Ejemplo: I think some people avoid making lists because they feel it takes too much time. Also, some are very punctual and confident they can remember tasks or items without writing them down.

Sugerencia: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar errors. Try to clearly state your preference first, then explain why. Use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid confusing phrases like 'I want to so penny like grocery store anything'.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have it with me. Sometimes I forget paper lists at home, which causes problems when shopping.

× I take a list when I go into any shopping malls like a Costco and Walmart.

✓ I take a list when I go into any shopping mall like Costco or Walmart.

The word 'malls' is plural, but the sentence refers to specific stores like Costco and Walmart, which are singular entities. Also, 'a Costco and Walmart' is incorrect; it should be 'Costco or Walmart' to indicate examples. Hence, 'shopping mall' should be singular to match the context.

× sometimes I also forget the item, but I purchases in the grocery store.

✓ sometimes I also forget the item, but I purchase it in the grocery store.

The verb 'purchases' is incorrectly used in the present tense third person singular form. Since the subject is 'I', the correct form is 'purchase'. Also, 'the item' should be followed by 'it' to complete the sentence properly.

× That's why I take. I make our list.

✓ That's why I take it. I make my list.

The pronoun 'our' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to their own list, so 'my' is appropriate. Also, 'I take' is incomplete and needs an object like 'it' to be grammatically correct.

× I also make our list when I do my work.

✓ I also make my list when I do my work.

The pronoun 'our' is incorrect because the speaker is referring to their own list, so 'my' should be used.

× I also mention I am or not a punctual person and sometime when I make at least I have remember.

✓ I also mention whether I am a punctual person or not, and sometimes when I make a list, I remember.

The sentence has pronoun and structure issues. 'I am or not' should be 'whether I am or not'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Make at least' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. 'I have remember' is incorrect; it should be 'I remember'.

× But I do first what I do 2nd and what I do third.

✓ But I do first what I do second and then what I do third.

The ordinal numbers should be written as 'second' and 'third' instead of '2nd' and 'third' for consistency. Also, adding 'then' improves the sentence flow.

× For example, I also do my work in Amazon. Is it weighted in Hamilton?

✓ For example, I also do my work at Amazon. Is it located in Hamilton?

The preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to a company like Amazon. 'Is it weighted in Hamilton?' is unclear; likely, the intended meaning is 'Is it located in Hamilton?'. The sentence structure is corrected accordingly.

× there are so many people are working in many another numerous workers.

✓ there are so many people working, and many other workers.

The phrase 'in many another numerous workers' is incorrect. It should be 'and many other workers' to correctly connect the ideas. Also, 'are working' is sufficient without 'are' after 'people'.

× They have not enough time to their family members and no Mattingly's.

✓ They do not have enough time for their family members and no material things.

'They have not enough time to their family members' is incorrect; it should be 'do not have enough time for their family members'. 'No Mattingly's' is unclear; likely intended as 'no material things' or 'no time for material things'.

× I think they people think about the list.

✓ I think these people think about the list.

'They people' is incorrect; it should be 'these people' to refer to specific people.

× people are so punctual. They also remember what items they purchase in now.

✓ people are so punctual. They also remember what items they purchase now.

The word 'in' before 'now' is unnecessary and incorrect; it should be removed.

× I think I'm a call list in my phone sometime when I go to my work and like my call is and I forgot the list of the paper in my home and it is a big issue.

✓ I think I keep a call list on my phone sometimes when I go to work, and if I forget the paper list at home, it is a big issue.

The phrase 'call list in my phone' should be 'call list on my phone'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Go to my work' is better as 'go to work'. 'Like my call is' is unclear and removed. 'List of the paper' should be 'paper list'. 'In my home' should be 'at home'.

× I want to so penny like grocery store anything.

✓ I want to shop at places like grocery stores or anywhere else.

The phrase 'so penny' is unclear; likely intended as 'shop'. 'Like grocery store anything' is incorrect; it should be 'at places like grocery stores or anywhere else'.

× But when I put my list in my phone it is very convenient tool member.

✓ But when I put my list on my phone, it is a very convenient tool, remember.

'Put my list in my phone' should be 'on my phone'. 'Tool member' is incorrect; likely intended as 'tool, remember' or 'tool to remember'. Added commas for clarity.