List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to improve coherence. For example, explain why you find making a list irrelevant and how you remember items.

Ejemplo: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I find it unnecessary. Since I only buy a few items, I can easily remember them. Moreover, I prefer to keep my shopping flexible rather than sticking to a list.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, be specific about why you find making lists irrelevant for work.

Ejemplo: I used to make lists when I worked at college, but now I don't because I find them unnecessary. I prefer to handle tasks as they come, which helps me stay flexible and efficient.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to answer the question directly with a complete sentence. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and time-consuming. Additionally, they prefer to rely on their memory, which they trust more than written notes.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to express your preference clearly and explain reasons with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because I can easily cross out completed items with a pen. However, making lists on my phone is also convenient since it's portable and easy to edit.

× Well, talking about myself, I don't actually choose, at least when I'm shopping, I find it irrelevant.

✓ Well, talking about myself, I don't actually make a list; at least when I'm shopping, I find it irrelevant.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'choose' where 'make a list' is appropriate. Also, the sentence structure is confusing; using a semicolon clarifies the two related ideas. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Actually it's several things, so it's not so many to forget about it.

✓ Actually, it's several things, so there aren't so many to forget about.

The phrase 'it's several things' is acceptable, but 'it's not so many' is incorrect because 'many' refers to countable plural nouns. The correction uses 'there aren't so many' to agree with the plural 'things'. Also, 'forget about it' is simplified to 'forget about' for clarity.

× Well that's really interesting question I always used to have, at least when I worked at college.

✓ Well, that's a really interesting question I always used to have, at least when I worked at college.

The original sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'really interesting question'. Adding it corrects the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.

× But seems I create I didn't do it anymore and I find this really irrelevant to do it.

✓ But it seems I don't do it anymore and I find it really irrelevant to do.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes tenses and has unclear phrasing. 'Seems I create' is incorrect; 'it seems' is the correct phrase. 'I didn't do it anymore' should be present tense 'I don't do it anymore' to match the current state. 'I find this really irrelevant to do it' is corrected to 'I find it really irrelevant to do' for clarity.

× I can choose the things by itself and as it flows.

✓ I can choose the things by myself and as it flows.

The reflexive pronoun 'itself' is incorrectly used for 'things' here. 'By myself' correctly refers to the speaker doing the action alone. This correction fixes the pronoun usage.

× While some people may find this boring and inefficient and is it just my rely on their memory?

✓ While some people may find this boring and inefficient, is it just my reliance on their memory?

The original sentence is confusing and grammatically incorrect. 'Is it just my rely' is incorrect; it should be 'is it just my reliance'. Also, a comma is needed before the question to separate clauses properly.

× Well, I would like to do at least on the paper so I can just write it in a cross with a pen if I did that or not.

✓ Well, I would like to do it at least on paper so I can just cross it out with a pen if I did it or not.

The phrase 'do at least on the paper' is incorrect; 'do it at least on paper' is correct. 'Write it in a cross' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cross it out'. Also, 'if I did that or not' is better as 'if I did it or not' for clarity.

× And I think that it will be much more beneficial to do the leads on your phone because it's useful and it's easy.

✓ And I think that it will be much more beneficial to make the lists on your phone because it's useful and easy.

'Do the leads' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make the lists'. This correction fixes the quantifier and word choice to match the intended meaning.