List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, and how it helps you.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized. Moreover, it ensures that I don't forget any important items. This method saves me time and reduces stress during shopping.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but is fragmented and lacks coherence. Use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and be specific about how making lists helps you at work.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. I write down my tasks on paper and check them off as I complete them. This helps me stay organized and saves a lot of time because I don't forget any important duties.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some good ideas but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Avoid using words like 'lethargic' without context, and try to explain reasons clearly and politely. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it hard to keep track of their tasks. Also, they may feel it takes too much time and prefer to remember things mentally instead.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to combine your ideas into complete sentences using linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Be specific about the app and how it helps you.

Ejemplo: To be honest, I prefer making lists on my phone because it is flexible and easy to use. For example, I use an app called To Do List, which helps me keep track of my tasks and stay organized throughout the day.

× Is it really helped me to keep things organized and I like to.

✓ It has really helped me to keep things organized and I like to.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'helped' without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is the present perfect 'has helped' to indicate an action that has relevance to the present. This correction fits the context of the sentence.

× Keep my things in.

✓ I keep my things in order.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'I keep my things in order' completes the sentence and conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× Check as I find it really convenient way to organize my things.

✓ I check them as I find it a really convenient way to organize my things.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. Adding 'I check them' and the article 'a' before 'really convenient way' corrects the sentence structure and improves clarity.

× When I'm at work, I like to. Write my daily routine on a paper and like to keep it organized and as well as I can check off.

✓ When I'm at work, I like to write my daily routine on paper and keep it organized, and I can check off

The original sentence has unnecessary periods and awkward phrasing. Removing the periods and restructuring the sentence improves flow and grammatical correctness.

× The things that I had completed and it really helped me save a lot of time and.

✓ The things that I have completed, and it really helps me save a lot of time.

The past perfect 'had completed' is not appropriate here; present perfect 'have completed' fits better. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I believe they find it quite difficult to keep a track of there.

✓ I believe they find it quite difficult to keep track of their

The word 'there' is incorrectly used instead of the possessive pronoun 'their'. Also, 'a track' should be 'track' without 'a' in this context.

× keep a track of there. Things that they have to do an due to the fact that most people are lethargic

✓ keep track of their things that they have to do, and due to the fact that most people are lethargic

The preposition 'of' is correct, but 'a track' should be 'track'. Also, 'an' is a typo and should be 'and'. Correcting these improves grammatical accuracy.

× I use application called To Do List that help me keep my thing, keep track of my things and.

✓ I use an application called To Do List that helps me keep my things, keep track of my things, and

The sentence lacks the article 'an' before 'application'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'application'. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' for consistency.