Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yeah, I do make a list when I shop because it's very important thing when you shot, I think as if you don't have any list while shopping, even not remember what you take to the home and what not to take the thing are very important to kiss in mind.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yeah, generally I make a list of my work because I like to be organized and ensure that I'd never forgot anything as I have written everything in my work To Do List. Yeah, it probably work because when I see the work in my paper, it shows me that I have done more thing that I have imagined.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
People. Don't like making this big 'cause they think that they will keep in mind that what is their task and they will do it. But it is not like that. Some of them are very lazy and some of them can't remember what was their trust. So it is very important to make A to do list.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Usually I prefer to list, make a list and my phone or people because whenever travel I don't have paper with me, but I do have my phone. So yeah, I prefer to no doubt any of the task in my phone as well.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating the importance of making a shopping list and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and avoid forgetting important items. This way, I can shop efficiently without wasting time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and using clearer linking words. Also, try to be more specific about how the list helps you in your work.
Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and not forget any tasks. Moreover, seeing the completed tasks on paper motivates me to be more productive.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and politely. Avoid negative words like 'lazy' and instead focus on reasons like memory or preference. Use linking words to connect your points.
Ejemplo: Some people avoid making lists because they believe they can remember their tasks without writing them down. However, this can lead to forgetting important duties, so making a to-do list is quite helpful.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to structure your answer clearly by stating your preference first, then giving reasons with linking words.
Ejemplo: I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, especially when I travel. This way, I don't need to carry paper, and I can easily update my tasks anytime.
× Yeah, I do make a list when I shop because it's very important thing when you shot, I think as if you don't have any list while shopping, even not remember what you take to the home and what not to take the thing are very important to kiss in mind.
✓ Yeah, I do make a list when I shop because it's a very important thing when you shop, I think if you don't have any list while shopping, you may not even remember what you take home and what not to take; these things are very important to keep in mind.
The original sentence has singular and plural issues such as 'important thing' which should be 'a very important thing' to indicate singular countable noun with an article. Also, 'the thing are' is incorrect; it should be 'these things are' to match plural form. Additionally, 'kiss in mind' is a typo and should be 'keep in mind'. Correcting these helps the sentence be grammatically accurate and clearer.
× Yeah, generally I make a list of my work because I like to be organized and ensure that I'd never forgot anything as I have written everything in my work To Do List.
✓ Yeah, generally I make a list of my work because I like to be organized and ensure that I never forget anything as I have written everything in my work To Do List.
The phrase 'I'd never forgot' is incorrect because 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but here the present perfect or simple present is needed. 'I'd' (I would) is also incorrect in this context. The correct form is 'I never forget' to express habitual action. This correction aligns the tense properly with the intended meaning.
× Yeah, it probably work because when I see the work in my paper, it shows me that I have done more thing that I have imagined.
✓ Yeah, it probably works because when I see the work on my paper, it shows me that I have done more things than I had imagined.
The verb 'work' should be 'works' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (subject-verb agreement). 'More thing' should be 'more things' to correctly use the plural form. Also, 'than I have imagined' is better as 'than I had imagined' to indicate past comparison. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.
× People. Don't like making this big 'cause they think that they will keep in mind that what is their task and they will do it.
✓ People don't like making this big because they think that they will keep in mind what their task is and they will do it.
The phrase 'making this big' is an idiomatic expression but the sentence has unnecessary punctuation and awkward phrasing. Also, 'that what is their task' is incorrect; it should be 'what their task is' to correctly structure the indirect question. Removing the period after 'People' and correcting the clause improves sentence flow and grammar.
× Some of them are very lazy and some of them can't remember what was their trust.
✓ Some of them are very lazy and some of them can't remember what their task was.
The word 'trust' is a typo and should be 'task'. Also, 'what was their trust' is incorrect word order for indirect question; it should be 'what their task was'. Correcting these makes the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.
× Usually I prefer to list, make a list and my phone or people because whenever travel I don't have paper with me, but I do have my phone.
✓ Usually I prefer to make a list on my phone or paper because whenever I travel I don't have paper with me, but I do have my phone.
The phrase 'prefer to list, make a list and my phone or people' is confusing and incorrect. It should be 'prefer to make a list on my phone or paper'. Also, 'whenever travel' lacks subject and should be 'whenever I travel'. These corrections fix preposition use and sentence structure for clarity.
× So yeah, I prefer to no doubt any of the task in my phone as well.
✓ So yeah, I prefer to note down any of the tasks in my phone as well.
The phrase 'prefer to no doubt any of the task' is incorrect. It should be 'prefer to note down any of the tasks'. 'No doubt' is a phrase meaning 'certainly' and is not a verb. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'any of the'. Correcting these improves meaning and grammar.