List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and ensure your vocabulary is appropriate and precise. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the supermarket. This helps me remember what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items. As a result, I save both time and money.

Sugerencia: Your response is relevant but lacks coherence and contains unclear phrases. Focus on structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Use linking words to improve flow and avoid repetition. Also, be careful with word choice to express your ideas clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a daily to-do list on my calendar to prioritise tasks. This helps me focus on the most important work first, which increases my productivity. Therefore, I find making lists very effective.

Sugerencia: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear expressions and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Also, avoid vague phrases and ensure your vocabulary fits the context.

Ejemplo: I think some people avoid making lists because they prefer to work at their own pace without feeling pressured. They might find lists too strict or stressful, which reduces their motivation.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows your preference but is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to organise your thoughts clearly and use complete sentences. Explain your reasons with specific details and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because I can easily add extra notes and tick off completed tasks. This gives me a sense of achievement, which I don't get when using my phone.

× Yes I do, every time I go to supermarket.

✓ Yes I do, every time I go to the supermarket.

The noun 'supermarket' is countable and singular, so it requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' before 'supermarket' is incorrect in this context.

× A makes you work on things I want to buy before I go to the supermarket.

✓ It makes you work on the things I want to buy before I go to the supermarket.

The sentence lacks a clear subject. 'A' is incorrect here; the correct subject is 'It' referring to 'a list'. Also, 'things' should be preceded by 'the' to specify particular items.

× Anne is that way I can save time and also like save some money.

✓ And in that way, I can save time and also save some money.

'Anne' is a mishearing or typo for 'And in'. The phrase 'like save some money' is informal and redundant; 'also save some money' is clearer. The conjunction and phrase structure need correction for clarity.

× Trying to avoid spending money on the unnecessary stuff I think is a good way to show.

✓ Trying to avoid spending money on unnecessary stuff, I think, is a good way to save.

The phrase 'the unnecessary stuff' is better as 'unnecessary stuff' without 'the' for general meaning. The sentence ends with 'to show' which is unclear; likely intended 'to save'. Also, commas improve readability.

× Oh yes, this is a good question. And actually make a list.

✓ Oh yes, this is a good question. And I actually make a list.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'actually make a list', which is necessary for grammatical correctness.

× It's on my calendar every day like which which thing is I need to do 1st

✓ It's on my calendar every day, like which thing I need to do first.

The phrase 'which which thing is I need to do 1st' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Correct placement is 'which thing I need to do first'. Also, '1st' should be spelled out as 'first' in formal speech.

× And this is what I know is so important.

✓ And this is what I know is very important.

The phrase 'so important' is informal; 'very important' is more appropriate. The sentence is acceptable but can be improved for clarity.

× I can finish the lighter.

✓ I can finish the lighter tasks.

'Lighter' alone is an adjective and needs a noun to modify. Likely intended 'lighter tasks' or 'lighter work'.

× So I just make it a priority every time I'm doing work.

✓ So I just make it a priority every time I do work.

The phrase 'I'm doing work' is less natural here; 'I do work' fits better with habitual action.

× And by the way, it's very effective.

✓ And by the way, it is very effective.

Contraction 'it's' is acceptable but spelling out 'it is' is clearer in formal correction. No preposition error here; sentence is acceptable.

× Oh, I think people don't like. To make a list when it comes to GOP or work, it's because they don't want to make the work as a very urgent.

✓ Oh, I think people don't like to make a list when it comes to job or work because they don't want to make the work seem very urgent.

The period after 'like' is incorrect; 'like to make' should be continuous. 'GOP' is likely a mishearing of 'job'. 'Make the work as a very urgent' is ungrammatical; correct is 'make the work seem very urgent'.

× They want to take much time or like they are free to do anything when I mean they want however they want it want to something like push or get it sold.

✓ They want to take their time or be free to do anything; I mean, they want to do things however they want, without pressure to push or get it done quickly.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correct conjunctions and phrasing improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× An actually like paper 'cause I can write it down like additional stuff or the paper and also I can every time are finished the one thing I can tackle them see what I did under C retinal to my fairly what I feel about it, but on a phone it's not so convenient and like I.

✓ Actually, I like paper because I can write down additional stuff on the paper, and every time I finish one thing, I can tick it off to see what I have done. Compared to my phone, it's not so convenient.

The original sentence has multiple pronoun errors, unclear references, and fragmented structure. Correct pronouns and sentence restructuring are necessary for clarity and grammatical correctness.