List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and grammatical accuracy. Try to form complete sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'because' or 'so'. Also, be specific about how making a list helps you save time.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For instance, last Sunday, I used my list to buy groceries efficiently, so I saved a lot of time.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your reasons. Also, avoid informal contractions like 'cause' in formal speaking. Try to provide a concise topic sentence followed by supporting details.

Ejemplo: Usually, I don't make a list for my work because I prefer to keep everything in my mind. I find that making a list can be time-consuming and less convenient for me.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas in complete sentences and use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect your points. Be specific about reasons why people dislike making lists.

Ejemplo: I think many people don't like making lists because they believe it takes too much time. Also, they prefer to remember things themselves and feel it helps them manage their budget better.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but needs better sentence structure and clarity. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'but' and 'because' to explain your preference clearly. Also, avoid unnecessary words like 'I'm also career' which is unclear.

Ejemplo: Usually, I make lists on paper, but nowadays I prefer using my phone because it is always with me. I use apps like Notes and Reminders, which save time and are more convenient.

× For example last Sunday I. Went to the supermarket to buy some groceries.

✓ For example, last Sunday I went to the supermarket to buy some groceries.

The sentence has an unnecessary period after 'I' which breaks the sentence structure. Removing the period and adding a comma after 'For example' improves the sentence flow and correctness.

× I with using our list it is more convenient and time savings.

✓ By using our list, it is more convenient and saves time.

The phrase 'I with using' is incorrect. Using 'By using' correctly introduces the method. Also, 'time savings' should be 'saves time' to fit the sentence structure.

× Time savings for me also.

✓ It also saves time for me.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Rephrasing to 'It also saves time for me' makes it a complete and clear sentence.

× At work, usually I don't make a list for my work 'cause I kept all the things in my mind and remind all the things.

✓ At work, I usually don't make a list because I keep everything in my mind and remind myself of all the things.

The verb tense 'kept' should be present tense 'keep' to match the habitual action. Also, 'remind all the things' is incorrect; it should be 'remind myself of all the things' to use the correct reflexive pronoun.

× I think it's time consuming and not more convenient to make a list for work.

✓ I think it's time-consuming and not very convenient to make a list for work.

'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. Also, 'not more convenient' is awkward; 'not very convenient' is more natural.

× I think a more most of the people don't like making list becauses in their point of view that it is a very time consuming and also.

✓ I think most people don't like making lists because, from their point of view, it is very time-consuming.

'A more most' is incorrect; 'most' suffices. 'Making list' should be 'making lists' to match plural form. 'Becauses' is a typo for 'because'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Uh, their stage of time and I think they more. Good to remind all the things and your bitings in their budget also.

✓ They manage their time well, and I think they are better at remembering everything and staying within their budget.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and phrases. Rewriting clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun use.

× Well usually I do make a list on paper or pen but nowadays I I am using my phone and it is always with me and I usually.

✓ Well, usually I make a list on paper with a pen, but nowadays I am using my phone because it is always with me.

'Make a list on paper or pen' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper with a pen'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.

× Make a list on my phone with different apps like a notes and reminders and it also time saving and more convenient to me and I'm I'm also career.

✓ I make a list on my phone using different apps like Notes and Reminders, and it is also time-saving and more convenient for me.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. 'a notes' is incorrect; 'Notes' is a proper noun. 'Time saving' should be 'time-saving'. The phrase 'I'm I'm also career' is unclear and omitted for clarity.