Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I always make a list. I make it because I don't wanna. Uh. Missed anything that I want to buy. Also a boy. Spending out of my budget.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I always make A to do list because. I don't want to forget anything I need to do. Also it helps me to stay focused because I know what to do. An I think making A to do list improve my work efficient.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I don't know the listen because I'm not like that type of person, but uhm. I think they are. The people who moves by the intent.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Honestly, I don't mind I I do both. But listen, Lee, I do, I prefer to do it on my phone because I can carry that around because. Carry that around and then. It's visible. 2.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答は基本的な内容を伝えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があり、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「I don't wanna. Uh. Missed anything that I want to buy. Also a boy. Spending out of my budget.」は不明瞭で、正しくは「I don't want to miss anything I want to buy, and also to avoid spending beyond my budget.」のように表現できます。より自然で明確な文章を心がけ、文をつなぐ接続詞を使うと良いでしょう。
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I don't want to miss anything I need to buy, and it also helps me avoid spending more than my budget.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法ミスや不自然な表現が目立ちます。例えば、「An I think making A to do list improve my work efficient.」は「And I think making a to-do list improves my work efficiency.」と修正できます。また、接続詞を適切に使い、文を滑らかにつなげることが重要です。より具体的な例や理由を加えるとさらに良くなります。
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a to-do list because it helps me remember all my tasks. Moreover, it keeps me focused since I know exactly what to do, and I believe it improves my work efficiency significantly.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答が不明瞭で、意味が伝わりにくいです。「I don't know the listen」や「people who moves by the intent」は誤りで、正しくは「I don't know why they don't like making lists because I'm not that type of person, but I think they are people who prefer to act spontaneously.」のように表現できます。より明確で自然な英語を使い、文法と語彙の正確さを意識しましょう。
Ejemplo: I'm not sure why some people don't like making lists because I'm not like that. However, I think they might prefer to act spontaneously rather than plan everything in advance.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答は意図が伝わりますが、繰り返しや不自然な表現が多く、文が途切れています。例えば、「But listen, Lee, I do, I prefer to do it on my phone because I can carry that around because. Carry that around and then. It's visible. 2.」は不明瞭です。より簡潔で明確な文章にし、繰り返しを避け、接続詞を使って文をつなげましょう。
Ejemplo: Honestly, I don't mind either way, but I prefer making lists on my phone because I can carry it everywhere, and it's always easy to see and update.
× I don't wanna. Uh. Missed anything that I want to buy.
✓ I don't wanna miss anything that I want to buy.
The verb 'missed' is incorrectly used in the past participle form here. After 'don't wanna' (do not want to), the base form of the verb 'miss' should be used. The correct form is 'miss' not 'missed'.
× Also a boy. Spending out of my budget.
✓ Also, I spend over my budget.
The phrase 'a boy' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The phrase 'spending out of my budget' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'over' or 'beyond' when referring to exceeding a budget. Also, the sentence lacks a subject and proper verb form.
× Yes, I always make A to do list because.
✓ Yes, I always make a to-do list because.
The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' as it is a compound noun.
× Also it helps me to stay focused because I know what to do. An I think making A to do list improve my work efficient.
✓ Also, it helps me to stay focused because I know what to do. And I think making a to-do list improves my work efficiency.
The conjunction 'An' is incorrect; it should be 'And'. 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list'. The verb 'improve' should be 'improves' to agree with the singular subject 'making a to-do list'. 'Work efficient' should be 'work efficiency' as the noun form is needed here.
× I don't know the listen because I'm not like that type of person, but uhm.
✓ I don't know the reason because I'm not that type of person, but uhm.
'The listen' is incorrect; likely intended 'the reason'. Also, 'I'm not like that type of person' is better as 'I'm not that type of person' for natural English.
× I think they are. The people who moves by the intent.
✓ I think they are the people who move by intent.
The sentence is fragmented. 'The people who moves' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'move'. Also, 'by the intent' should be 'by intent' or 'by their intent'.
× Honestly, I don't mind I I do both. But listen, Lee, I do, I prefer to do it on my phone because I can carry that around because.
✓ Honestly, I don't mind. I do both. But listen, Lee, I prefer to do it on my phone because I can carry it around.
The sentence has repeated 'I I' which is an error. 'Carry that around because' is incomplete and redundant; 'carry it around' is sufficient. Also, the sentence is fragmented and needs punctuation.
× Carry that around and then. It's visible. 2.
✓ I can carry it around and then it's visible too.
The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into one sentence improves clarity and flow. '2' is likely a mishearing of 'too'.