List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use correct grammar and avoid small errors like 'This help' which should be 'This helps'. Also, avoid redundancy such as 'App A4 paper' which is unclear; just say 'a piece of A4 paper'. Keep your sentences clear and concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually write a shopping list on a piece of A4 paper with a pen before going to the supermarket. This helps me remember all the items I need and saves time while shopping.

Sugerencia: Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases like 'Are you Julie Michaelis from my work?'. Use clear and complete sentences. Also, correct grammar errors such as 'I'm completed' should be 'I have completed'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized. When I finish a task, I mark it with a red marker to show that I have completed it, which makes it easier for me to track my progress.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. For example, say 'Some people are too lazy to write lists, while others might forget to use them, which can cause problems.'

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it's too much effort, and others might forget to check their lists, which can lead to confusion or missed tasks.

Sugerencia: Good answer with clear reasons. Improve grammar by saying 'making a list' and correct 'losing lose it' to 'lose it'. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Actually, I prefer making a list on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily access it anywhere. If I write a list on paper, I might forget it at home or lose it, so having it on my phone is more reliable.

× This help me to remember all the items I need and saves time while I shopping.

✓ This helps me to remember all the items I need and saves time while I am shopping.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'This'. Also, 'while I shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'while I am shopping' to use the present continuous tense correctly.

× Are you Julie Michaelis from my work? Because it's helped me to stay organized.

✓ Are you Julie Michaelis from my work? Because it has helped me to stay organized.

The contraction 'it's' is ambiguous here; 'it has' is clearer and more appropriate for the present perfect tense indicating an action that has relevance to the present.

× When I finish a task, I mark, I mark it with a red marker to show that I'm completed this work, which makes it easier, easier for me. To track more.

✓ When I finish a task, I mark it with a red marker to show that I have completed this work, which makes it easier for me to track more.

The phrase 'I'm completed this work' is incorrect; it should be 'I have completed this work' to use the present perfect tense properly. Also, the sentence was fragmented and redundant phrases like 'I mark, I mark' and 'easier, easier' were corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I think there become so lazy to write analyst to complete the their works but some people might be forgetting this work and there will be a massive if they forget their work.

✓ I think some people become so lazy to write a list to complete their work, but some people might forget their work and there will be a big problem if they do.

The original sentence has multiple pronoun and word choice errors: 'there become' is incorrect, 'analyst' is likely a wrong word for 'list', 'the their works' is incorrect pronoun usage, and 'massive' is incomplete without a noun. The corrected sentence uses proper pronouns and clearer wording.

× Actually I prefer making list on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily access it anywhere. If I write a list on a paper I might forget it at home or losing lose it, but with my phone I always have it with me.

✓ Actually, I prefer making a list on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily access it anywhere. If I write a list on paper, I might forget it at home or lose it, but with my phone, I always have it with me.

The phrase 'making list' needs an article 'a list'. 'On a paper' should be 'on paper' without an article. 'Losing lose it' is incorrect; it should be 'lose it'. Commas are added for clarity.