List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as 'Not to miss anything is really useful' which is unclear. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples to enrich your answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stick to my budget and ensures I don't forget any items. For instance, last week I saved money by only buying what was on my list.

Sugerencia: Your answer has repetition and some grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'helps me' and use linking words to clarify your points. Also, be more specific about how the list helps your work.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently. For example, by prioritising my tasks, I can meet deadlines more easily.

Sugerencia: There are several language errors and unclear phrases such as 'prayer organizing' and 'those peoples'. Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar. Also, provide clearer reasons and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to work spontaneously. However, lists can improve efficiency by helping to prioritise tasks.

Sugerencia: Your answer contains many errors and unclear phrases such as 'pepper is not waste yard' and 'To Do List John phone'. Focus on clear sentence structure and correct vocabulary. Also, explain your preference clearly with reasons and linking words.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and environmentally friendly. Since I always have my phone with me, I can easily add or check items anytime.

× Yes, I make a list while shopping that helped me to stay in my budget.

✓ Yes, I make a list while shopping that helps me to stay within my budget.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'helped' when the present tense 'helps' is appropriate because the action is habitual and ongoing. Also, 'in my budget' should be 'within my budget' for correct prepositional usage.

× Not to miss anything is really useful.

✓ Not missing anything is really useful.

The phrase 'Not to miss anything' is an incorrect infinitive phrase used as a subject. The gerund form 'Not missing anything' correctly functions as a noun phrase here.

× Yes, I make a list for my work. It helps me, helps me to be organized in my work, to be in sure it works, makes my work more effectively and efficiently.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work. It helps me to be organized, to be sure it works, and makes my work more effective and efficient.

The original sentence has repetition and awkward phrasing. 'Helps me, helps me to be organized' is redundant. 'To be in sure' is incorrect; it should be 'to be sure'. 'More effectively and efficiently' should be 'more effective and efficient' to correctly modify 'work'.

× Some people don't like prayer organizing.

✓ Some people don't like proper organizing.

The word 'prayer' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'proper'. Correcting it to 'proper' makes the sentence meaningful.

× Those peoples don't like making list.

✓ Those people don't like making lists.

'Peoples' is incorrect when referring to multiple persons; 'people' is the correct plural form. Also, 'making list' should be 'making lists' to agree in number.

× But obviously those lists will help you to work more efficiently.

✓ But obviously those lists will help you work more efficiently.

The phrase 'help you to work' is acceptable but 'help you work' is more natural and concise in English.

× I rather prefer form over my paper because it's less expensive, it's pepper is not waste yard and also I'm always having my phone in my hand so it's very easy and convenient for me To Do List John phone.

✓ I prefer using my phone over paper because it's less expensive, it doesn't waste paper, and I'm always holding my phone, so it's very easy and convenient for me to use a to-do list on my phone.

The original sentence contains multiple errors: 'form over my paper' should be 'using my phone over paper'; 'it's pepper is not waste yard' is incorrect and should be 'it doesn't waste paper'; 'I'm always having my phone in my hand' is better as 'I'm always holding my phone'; 'To Do List John phone' is unclear and corrected to 'to use a to-do list on my phone'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.