Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your response direct and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), correct grammatical errors, use concise vocabulary, and avoid redundancy. Limit to 2–3 sentences. Add one specific example of when you sing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing sometimes because it helps me express my emotions. For example, when I feel happy I often sing along to pop songs at home to lift my mood.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use precise language. Correct tense and word choice (learned, singing, middle school). Mention a brief detail about what you learned and why you forgot it. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word like 'however'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned basic singing techniques in middle school music classes. However, I forgot most of them over time because I didn't practice regularly.

Sugerencia: Good specific content and clear reason. Improve by correcting small grammar (to my friend/her) and making sentences smoother. Use linking words and keep it concise. Mention the song or gesture for richer detail.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for a close friend because her birthday is next Saturday. I plan to sing ‘Happy Birthday’ while presenting a small gift to surprise her.

Sugerencia: Good structure with contrast. Improve tone by avoiding exaggerated words like 'disaster' and use softer vocabulary (might spoil the mood). Provide a short reason or example. Use linking words such as 'however' or 'on the other hand'.

Ejemplo: I think it depends on who is singing. Professional singers can often convey joy through their performance; however, an unskilled performance might make the audience uncomfortable rather than happy.

Sugerencia: Avoid unclear phrases and unnecessary words. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (songs, refreshing → refresh), and split into two sentences using a linking word. Be polite when describing poor performances. Give a specific example of a singer or style you enjoy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy listening to professional singers because their songs help me relax and refresh my mind. If a performance sounds poor, I usually move away or turn off the music.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Use clear tense and structure, combine related ideas with linking words (and, so), and state your intention confidently. Provide a concrete plan (when you might take a class).

Ejemplo: Yes, I took weekly music classes in junior high where the teacher taught basic singing techniques, but I have forgotten most of it. Now that I have more free time, I plan to enroll in a beginner singing course next month.

× I will not say I'm a thin lover and most of the time I sing a awful sound, but if I'm on a good mood I'd like to sing one of the two lyrics to express my feelings.

✓ I will not say I'm a big fan and most of the time I sing poorly, but if I'm in a good mood I'd like to sing one of the two songs to express my feelings.

Errors: 'thin lover' is incorrect adjective noun choice and should be 'big fan' (idiomatic). 'a awful sound' uses incorrect article and adjective choice; 'sing a awful sound' is ungrammatical — use adverb 'poorly' to describe singing. 'on a good mood' uses incorrect preposition; correct is 'in a good mood'. 'lyrics' refers to words of a song, not a song itself; use 'songs'. Suggestions: use idiomatic nouns (big fan), use adverbs to describe actions (sing poorly), use correct prepositions with mood (in a good mood), and use correct noun (song vs lyric).

× I suppose I should say yes because maybe I learned some saying skills on middle school's music classes, but I forgot most of them due to time and the lack of practice.

✓ I suppose I should say yes because maybe I learned some singing skills in middle school music classes, but I forgot most of them due to time and lack of practice.

Errors: 'saying skills' is wrong word; should be 'singing skills' (verb+ing). 'on middle school's music classes' uses wrong preposition and possessive; correct is 'in middle school music classes' or 'in middle-school music classes'. 'the lack of practice' is awkward with 'the'; use 'lack of practice'. Suggestions: use correct -ing form for activity nouns, use 'in' for being part of classes, and omit unnecessary definite article before 'lack'.

× I'd like to sing to my friends because next Saturday is her birthday so I will sing a birthday song while holding the gifts as a surprise to her.

✓ I'd like to sing to my friend because next Saturday is her birthday, so I will sing a birthday song while holding the gift as a surprise for her.

Errors: 'friends' (plural) conflicts with 'her birthday' (singular); use 'friend'. 'gifts' plural is acceptable but 'the gifts' plus 'a surprise to her' is awkward; 'the gift' or 'gifts' with 'a surprise for her' is better. Preposition 'to her' after 'surprise' should be 'for her'. Suggestions: ensure number agreement between nouns and pronouns, choose correct prepositions (a surprise for someone), and keep consistency in singular/plural forms.

× I think it depends on who is singing. If professional singers do it, I believe they could express happiness to people. But if someone who can't do it well, that will only cause a disaster.

✓ I think it depends on who is singing. If professional singers do it, I believe they can make people feel happy. But if someone cannot do it well, it will only be unpleasant.

Errors: 'they could express happiness to people' is awkward modal choice; 'can make people feel happy' is more natural. 'But if someone who can't do it well' is a sentence fragment; remove 'who' or rephrase ('But if someone cannot do it well'). 'that will only cause a disaster' is hyperbolic and unnatural; use 'it will only be unpleasant' or 'it may be unpleasant'. Suggestions: use correct sentence structure to avoid fragments, choose appropriate modal verbs for likelihood, and use natural collocations ('make people feel happy').

× SMS good boy, I like listening to professional singers song that will help me relax and refreshing my mind but if someone seems poorly then I will just go away and no longer stay in front of him.

✓ To be honest, I like listening to professional singers' songs because they help me relax and refresh my mind, but if someone sings poorly then I will just walk away and not stay near them.

Errors: 'SMS good boy' is unclear; probably intended 'to be honest'. 'professional singers song' needs possessive or plural noun: 'professional singers' songs'. 'that will help me relax and refreshing my mind' mixes forms; use parallel verbs 'help me relax and refresh my mind'. 'someone seems poorly' uses adverb/adjective incorrectly; 'sings poorly' is correct. 'go away and no longer stay in front of him' is awkward and gender-specific; use 'walk away and not stay near them'. Suggestions: use clear discourse markers ('to be honest'), possessive or plural nouns correctly, keep parallel verb forms, and use neutral pronouns to avoid gender specificity.

× I suppose so was a junior high school student which took music class once a week and I believe the teacher taught us how to sing at that time but I forgot most of them. But now I have more free time. Maybe umm next time I will try to take same class again.

✓ I was a junior high school student who took music class once a week, and I believe the teacher taught us how to sing at that time, but I forgot most of it. Now I have more free time, so maybe next time I will try to take the same class again.

Errors: 'I suppose so was a junior high school student' is ungrammatical; subject should come first: 'I was a junior high school student'. Use 'who' not 'which' for people. 'music class' can be singular; 'most of them' should be 'most of it' (refers to 'what was taught' or 'the skills'). 'take same class again' missing article 'the'. Suggestions: use correct subject-verb order, use 'who' for people, ensure pronoun agreement with noun (it vs them), and include articles where needed.