Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response to the question first, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid mixing different ideas without clear connection. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing very much because it helps me relax and express my feelings. When I was younger, I enjoyed listening to rock music, but now I prefer classical music. In the future, I hope to explore other types of music that can help me feel calm and peaceful.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains some grammatical errors. Make sure to answer the question directly and clearly. Avoid unnecessary details that do not relate to your own experience. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas.

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally. I did not take any singing classes or join any music school. However, I support my younger sister who is a professional singer by buying her singing instruments.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has many fillers like 'uh' which affect fluency. Try to speak more confidently and clearly. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Ejemplo: I am not a professional singer, so I don't sing often. However, I usually sing at family gatherings or celebrations when my relatives ask me to. Singing in these occasions helps me relax and enjoy the moment.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid unnecessary pauses. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When someone feels bored or sad, listening to light or classical music can help them feel calm. For example, I like to sing or listen to music when I travel or before going to sleep because it makes me feel peaceful.

× Back when I was a bit younger I used to listen some rock music and till now I like to use the classical music and in the future I hope that I will like to listen some kinds of music that will help me to relax myself.

✓ Back when I was a bit younger I used to listen to some rock music and till now I like to listen to classical music and in the future I hope that I will like to listen to some kinds of music that will help me to relax myself.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by the object. Missing 'to' causes incorrect verb-preposition usage, which is a common error. Always use 'listen to' when referring to hearing music or sounds.

× No, I have. I don't have any academic experience because I didn't enroll myself in any academic institution for learning thinking.

✓ No, I haven't. I don't have any academic experience because I didn't enroll myself in any academic institution for learning singing.

The response 'No, I have' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'No, I haven't' to correctly answer the question about past experience. Also, 'learning thinking' seems to be a mistake; likely intended 'learning singing'. The past tense 'didn't enroll' is correct here.

× But I have sometimes purchased some instrument singing instruments for my younger sister because she's a professional singer. So I have purchased a lot of stuff for them for her.

✓ But I have sometimes purchased some singing instruments for my younger sister because she's a professional singer. So I have purchased a lot of stuff for her.

The phrase 'instrument singing instruments' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'singing instruments'. Also, 'for them for her' is confusing and incorrect pronoun use; it should be 'for her' referring to the sister.

× I'm not a professional singer, so I don't know how to sing properly, but however, when I attend some uh, celebration or family gatherings at different types of programs, I have to, uh, sing uh, when my family members or friends ask me uh, it really uh, helps me to uh, refresh our mind and release our pressure.

✓ I'm not a professional singer, so I don't know how to sing properly. However, when I attend celebrations or family gatherings at different types of programs, I have to sing when my family members or friends ask me. It really helps me to refresh my mind and relieve my stress.

The sentence is too long and contains unnecessary fillers and conjunctions like 'but however'. It should be split for clarity. Also, 'refresh our mind' should be 'refresh my mind' to maintain pronoun consistency. 'Release our pressure' is better expressed as 'relieve my stress'.

× Yes uh, when people actually feel bored or fell down, they try to passing some light or classical music to calm themselves down.

✓ Yes, when people actually feel bored or feel down, they try to play some light or classical music to calm themselves down.

The phrase 'try to passing' is incorrect; after 'try to' the base form of the verb should be used, so 'try to play' is correct. Also, 'fell down' is past tense; 'feel down' is the correct present tense expression here.

× Uh, personally, I like, uh, singing when I travel, uh, different places and uh, I also like to listen music, uh, when they can't go to sleep, uh, because it really.

✓ Uh, personally, I like singing when I travel to different places and I also like to listen to music when I can't go to sleep because it really helps.

The phrase 'listen music' is missing the preposition 'to' after 'listen'. Also, 'when they can't go to sleep' is unclear; it should be 'when I can't go to sleep' to maintain subject consistency. The sentence was incomplete and is corrected for clarity and completeness.