Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了个人感受和具体例子，内容较丰富，但有语法错误（如"make"应为"makes"），且句子结构稍显复杂，建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，同时避免重复表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me connect with the emotions of the singer. For example, when I sing karaoke, I try to understand the artist's feelings, which makes my singing more expressive.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较完整，但存在语法错误（如"change"应为"chance"，"is when I have fun"表达不清），建议注意词汇拼写和句子表达的准确性，避免语法错误影响表达效果。

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned to sing professionally because I had few chances for formal training when I was young. However, singing remains my hobby and I enjoy it very much.

Sugerencia: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，使用了连接词，表达自然流畅。建议注意细节词汇的准确性，如"weakness"应为复数"weaknesses"，以及"skill"应为复数"skills"，以提升语言准确度。

Ejemplo: I prefer to sing for myself because I am introverted and not confident to perform in front of others. Singing alone helps me identify my weaknesses and improve my skills more effectively. Moreover, it allows me to relax and enjoy music without any pressure.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在拼写错误（"seeing"应为"singing"，"souls"应为"songs"），且句子结构不够准确，建议加强词汇拼写和语法的准确性，避免影响表达的清晰度。

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it stimulates the release of dopamine, which makes people feel joyful. However, if the songs are repetitive or sad, people might feel bored or unhappy when listening to them.

× which make me sing better.

✓ which makes me sing better.

主语是which，指代前面的单数名词connection，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数makes，保持主谓一致。

× However, singing is still my hobby is when I have fun.

✓ However, singing is still my hobby when I have fun.

句子中多余的is导致结构混乱，应删除多余的is，使句子结构完整通顺。

× I'm not so confident to perform my singing skills in front of others.

✓ I'm not so confident to perform my singing skills in front of others.

此句中“confident to perform”搭配不当，应该用confident in doing sth. 但根据题目要求只纠正列出的语法错误类型，此处不做修改。

× it helps me relax and enjoy the music without pressure.

✓ it helps me relax and enjoy music without pressure.

music是不可数名词，前面不需要加the，去掉the更符合习惯用法。

× Yes, I believe seeing can bring happiness to people because it stimulates the release of dopamine, a chemical that can enhance the feeling of joy.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it stimulates the release of dopamine, a chemical that can enhance the feeling of joy.

seeing是动名词，意思是“看”，应为singing“唱歌”，此处是拼写错误，属于词汇错误，不在语法错误列表内，不做修改。

× if the souls are repetitive or sad, people may feel bored and unhappy when they listening to them.

✓ if the songs are repetitive or sad, people may feel bored and unhappy when they listen to them.

souls应为songs，且动词listening前应加助动词do的形式listen，保持时态一致。根据题目要求只纠正列出的语法错误类型，listening改为listen属于动词+ing形式错误，改正为listen符合语法。