Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa tự nhiên và thiếu rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có thêm chi tiết hỗ trợ để làm rõ lý do bạn thích hát.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Singing is a fun activity that lifts my mood and allows me to connect with music.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về trải nghiệm của bạn.

Ejemplo: I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I used to sing for fun at home and with my friends. However, I think joining a music club when I was younger would have been a great way to develop my skills and express my creativity.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh những chi tiết không cần thiết. Hãy thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

Ejemplo: Usually, I sing just for myself because I enjoy it. Sometimes, I sing for my close friends during karaoke nights, even though I know my voice isn't very good.

Sugerencia: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa quan điểm của bạn.

Ejemplo: I think singing can bring happiness to many people because it allows them to express their feelings. However, some people might feel shy or uncomfortable singing in front of others, so it depends on the individual.

× This I like because they are fun.

✓ I like this because it is fun.

The pronoun 'they' is plural but refers to 'this' which is singular. The correct singular pronoun 'it' should be used to agree with 'this'.

× I actually not really.

✓ I actually have not really.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense, which is appropriate here to express experience up to now.

× I didn't really say any for more singing lesson when I was young, I just sang for fun at home or with friends.

✓ I didn't really take any singing lessons when I was young; I just sang for fun at home or with friends.

The phrase 'say any for more singing lesson' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'take any singing lessons'. Also, the sentence should be split or connected properly for clarity.

× The only exception being my close friends who can tolerate my horrific voice week over runs out of bridge and bridge on high note whenever we have right to a karaoke night or the while I would.

✓ The only exception is my close friends who can tolerate my horrific voice, which often goes off-key and cracks on high notes whenever we have a karaoke night, or else I would sing alone.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'week over runs out of bridge and bridge on high note' and 'have right to a karaoke night or the while I would'. It needs restructuring and clarification for meaning and grammar.

× for some people they might not be their thing, especially if they are shy or uncomfortable performing.

✓ For some people, it might not be their thing, especially if they are shy or uncomfortable performing.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used as the subject of 'might not be their thing'. The impersonal pronoun 'it' should be used to refer to the activity in general.

× But in general I would say singing the bring happiness to most people.

✓ But in general, I would say singing brings happiness to most people.

The verb 'bring' should be in the third person singular form 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'.