Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意时态一致性，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: No, I don't like singing because I am tone deaf. When I listen to my recordings, they don't sound good, which makes me feel frustrated. Also, sometimes my friends try not to laugh when I sing, and that makes me feel embarrassed.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子结构不完整。建议使用正确的时态和句型，表达更清晰，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing only in primary school music class. At that time, I thought I sang well, but my dad's friend tried not to laugh, which made me feel embarrassed for both of us.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了想法，但句子较长且结构不够清晰。建议分句表达，注意语法和时态一致，使用连接词使句子更自然。

Ejemplo: As a tone deaf person, I probably shouldn't sing for people I dislike. However, I want to practice singing in the future so I can sing well for my mother because I love her and she wants me to sing.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误和表达不清的地方。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，避免模糊表达，增强逻辑连贯性。

Ejemplo: Yes, singing can bring happiness to both the singer and the listener. For the singer, it helps to relax and forget unhappy things. For me, even though I am not a good singer, I feel relieved when I sing.

× No I don't like singing because I'm a tone deaf and when I think I sing well the recording doesn't say so This make me feel frustrated.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I'm tone deaf and when I think I sing well, the recording doesn't say so. This makes me feel frustrated.

这里的'tone deaf'前不需要冠词'a'，因为'tone deaf'是形容词短语，表示状态。'This make me'中的'make'应为第三人称单数形式'makes'，因为主语是单数的'This'。

× Also sometimes I can feel my friends struggling to not laugh when I am singing and this also make me feel.

✓ Also, sometimes I can feel my friends struggling not to laugh when I am singing, and this also makes me feel bad.

'struggling to not laugh'应改为'struggling not to laugh'，不定式的否定应放在'to'之后。'this also make me'中的'make'应为第三人称单数'makes'。句尾缺少宾语，补充'feel bad'使句子完整。

× Yes, I only learned how to sing in the music class of primary school.

✓ Yes, I only learned how to sing in the music class in primary school.

'in the music class of primary school'表达不自然，改为'in the music class in primary school'更符合英语习惯。

× At that time I thought I sing really well but I my dad's mate was struggling not to laugh and I feel embarrassed on both me and him.

✓ At that time, I thought I sang really well, but my dad's mate was struggling not to laugh and I felt embarrassed for both him and me.

'I thought I sing'应为过去时态'sang'，因为描述过去的情况。'I feel embarrassed'应为过去时态'felt'。'embarrassed on both me and him'应改为'embarrassed for both him and me'，介词用法错误且人称顺序调整。

× I think as a tone deaf person I should probably sing for the person who I hate, but I think I might practice in the future and trying to sing well to sing for my mother because I love her and she wants me to sing.

✓ I think as a tone deaf person, I should probably sing for the person who I hate, but I think I might practice in the future and try to sing well to sing for my mother because I love her and she wants me to sing.

'I might practice in the future and trying to sing well'中，'trying'应改为动词原形'try'，因为前面有情态动词'might'，后面动词应为原形。

× Yes, things bring happiness for both the singer and the listener.

✓ Yes, singing brings happiness to both the singer and the listener.

'things bring happiness'不够具体，改为'singing brings happiness'更符合语境。'bring'应改为第三人称单数形式'brings'，因为主语是单数的'singing'。

× For the singer, they can feel relaxed and leave everything unhappy behind.

✓ For the singer, they can feel relaxed and leave all unhappiness behind.

'leave everything unhappy behind'表达不自然，'unhappy'是形容词，需用名词'unhappiness'。'everything unhappy'应改为'all unhappiness'。

× As for me, although I'm not guessing, I feel relieved when I am singing.

✓ As for me, although I'm not a good singer, I feel relieved when I am singing.

'I'm not guessing'语义不明，可能想表达'我不是唱得好'，应改为'I'm not a good singer'。