Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer shows enthusiasm, but it is a bit long and contains some awkward phrasing. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding a clear reason. Avoid redundancy and use simpler, more natural expressions.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax. Singing makes me feel happy and connected to others.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use the past tense correctly and provide more specific details. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in ninth grade. I took singing classes at my school and performed on stage during school events.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but some sentences are unclear or incorrect. Avoid confusing phrases like "outrageous to song" and focus on expressing your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my family because they always support me. Singing helps me share my feelings with them, especially during family gatherings, which makes us closer.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some good points but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use simpler, clearer language and avoid repetition. Explain your ideas logically with linking words and specific examples.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because songs often have positive messages and emotions. They help people express themselves and feel joyful.

× As I love to sing a song because I want to express my feelings throughout this song that I sing for everyone, it makes me so relaxable at any time.

✓ As I love singing songs because I want to express my feelings through these songs that I sing for everyone, it makes me feel so relaxed at any time.

The phrase 'love to sing a song' is better expressed as 'love singing songs' to use the gerund form after 'love' for general activities. 'Throughout this song' is incorrect; 'through these songs' is more appropriate to express the medium of expression. 'Relaxable' is not a correct adjective; the correct form is 'relaxed' to describe a feeling.

× Yes, obviously I learn to sing when I was in grade 9.

✓ Yes, obviously I learned to sing when I was in grade 9.

The verb 'learn' should be in the past tense 'learned' to match the past time reference 'when I was in grade 9.'

× I attend the class of singing in in my school and I perform the in stage.

✓ I attended singing classes at my school and performed on stage.

The sentence has redundancy and incorrect prepositions. 'Attend the class of singing in in my school' is awkward; it should be 'attended singing classes at my school.' 'I perform the in stage' is incorrect; it should be 'performed on stage.' Also, past tense 'attended' and 'performed' are used to match the past time context.

× I want to share my problem throughout the song.

✓ I want to share my problems through the song.

The preposition 'throughout' means 'during the whole time' and is not appropriate here. 'Through' is the correct preposition to indicate the medium by which the problems are shared. Also, 'problem' should be plural 'problems' to be more natural.

× It is outrageous to song in family gathering.

✓ It is enjoyable to sing at family gatherings.

'Outrageous' means shocking or unacceptable, which is likely not the intended meaning. 'Enjoyable' fits better to express pleasure. 'To song' is incorrect; the verb should be 'to sing.' Also, 'family gathering' should be plural 'family gatherings' to generalize the statement.

× It is so helpful to talk about our problems throughout the song.

✓ It is so helpful to talk about our problems through the song.

Again, 'throughout' is incorrect here; 'through' is the correct preposition to indicate the medium of communication.

× Yes I think singing can bring happiness to people people because in every lyrics of song there is the vibe of happiness and some lovable things that help us to pre present our shadow in other.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because in every lyric of a song there is a vibe of happiness and some lovable things that help us to represent our shadow in others.

The word 'people' is repeated unnecessarily. 'Lyrics' is plural, but here it should be singular 'lyric' to match 'every.' 'Pre present' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'represent.' 'Our shadow in other' is unclear; 'our shadow in others' is more grammatically correct but still unclear in meaning. The sentence needs clarity but the correction focuses on grammar.