Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，如“saying”应为“singing”，句子结构不够完整，表达不够自然。建议注意动词的正确形式，避免重复和不完整的句子，并且使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and reduce stress after a long day. For example, on weekends, I often go to karaoke with my friends. Not only does it make us happy, but it also strengthens our friendship.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在拼写错误，如“see”应为“sing”，句子表达不够流畅。建议注意单词拼写，使用更准确的表达，并且补充更多细节使回答更丰富。

Ejemplo: No, I haven't learned to sing professionally, but I have taught myself using apps like K Sun, which allows users to record and share their songs.

Sugerencia: 回答中有代词错误，如“his”应为“her”，句子有些重复。建议注意代词的正确使用，避免重复表达，并且使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: I want to sing with my mom because she is a professional singer who can give me valuable guidance. For example, when we sing together, she offers tips that help me improve my skills, and I am always attracted by her beautiful voice.

Sugerencia: 回答中有拼写错误和语法错误，如“seeing”应为“singing”，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议注意拼写和语法，使用完整且连贯的句子，并提供具体例子。

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, after a long day of studying, some of my friends like to go to karaoke to have fun and relax.

× Yes, I like saying because it's a good way to help me relax and reduce my stress after a long day starting.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it's a good way to help me relax and reduce my stress after a long day.

动词 'like' 后面应接动名词形式，'saying' 应改为 'singing'。此外，'after a long day starting' 结构不正确，应简化为 'after a long day'。

× For example, during weekends I will choose to hang out with my friends to go to karaoke.

✓ For example, during weekends I choose to hang out with my friends and go to karaoke.

'choose to hang out with my friends to go to karaoke' 结构不合理，应使用并列结构 'hang out with my friends and go to karaoke'。

× Umm not only good way to make us feel happy but also.

✓ Umm, it's not only a good way to make us feel happy but also enjoyable.

句子缺少主语和谓语，且结构不完整，应补充完整句子。

× No, I haven't learned how to see professionally, but I learned by myself through the related apps, for example the K Sun apps that allows you to publish your songs.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally, but I have learned by myself through related apps, for example the K Sun app that allows you to publish your songs.

'see' 应为 'sing'，动词时态应保持一致，'learned' 前应加助动词 'have' 形成现在完成时，'apps' 单复数不一致，'K Sun apps' 应为单数 'app'。

× I want to sing with my mom because she is a professional singer that could give me a lot of guidance.

✓ I want to sing with my mom because she is a professional singer who can give me a lot of guidance.

关系代词 'that' 用于指人时应改为 'who'，情态动词 'could' 改为 'can' 更符合语境。

× For example, when I sing with her, she will give me some guidance that really help me to improve my singing skills and I always attracted by his singing voice.

✓ For example, when I sing with her, she gives me some guidance that really helps me improve my singing skills, and I am always attracted by her singing voice.

'help' 应为第三人称单数 'helps'，'attracted' 前应加助动词 'am'，'his' 应为 'her'。

× Yes, I think seeing can do bring happiness to people for example after a long day study, some of friends will choose to come to go to karaoke, to have fun and many.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For example, after a long day of study, some of my friends choose to go to karaoke to have fun and more.

'seeing' 应为 'singing'，'can do bring' 结构错误，应为 'can bring'，'after a long day study' 应为 'after a long day of study'，'some of friends' 应为 'some of my friends'，'come to go to karaoke' 结构错误，应为 'go to karaoke'。