Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. I often watch my favorite singers on TV, who inspire me with their talent and passion.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I haven't had the chance to learn singing formally because of financial constraints. However, I hope to take singing lessons in the future when I can afford them.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do và tránh lặp từ. Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: I would love to sing with my idol in Vietnam because he is not only talented but also hardworking and kind. Collaborating with him would be a great honor.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people reduce stress and forget about their daily problems for a while.

× I I usually or watching my singer in the TV, he's a very handsome and and he sing very well and I want to I want like singing very much.

✓ I usually watch my singer on TV, he's very handsome and he sings very well and I like singing very much.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'watching' instead of the base verb 'watch' after 'usually'. Also, 'he sing' should be 'he sings' to agree with the third person singular subject. The phrase 'I want to I want like singing' is redundant and incorrect; it should be simplified to 'I like singing very much'.

× he sing very well

✓ he sings very well

In English, verbs in the present tense must agree with their subjects. For third person singular subjects like 'he', the verb usually takes an -s ending. Therefore, 'sing' should be 'sings'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule.

× I really want to lose thinking in the future.

✓ I really want to learn singing in the future.

The phrase 'lose thinking' is incorrect and does not convey the intended meaning. The student likely meant 'learn singing'. Modal verbs like 'want to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'want to learn' is correct.

× I can learn how I can staying in future.

✓ I can learn how to sing in the future.

The phrase 'I can staying' is incorrect because modal verbs like 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the present participle. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future' for correct article usage.

× I usually or watching my singer in the TV

✓ I usually watch my singer on TV

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to television; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'or watching' is incorrect and should be 'watch'.

× he's very handsome and love his friend.

✓ he's very handsome and loves his friends.

The verb 'love' must agree with the third person singular subject 'he', so it should be 'loves'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' if referring generally, or singular if specific. The pronoun usage is correct but verb agreement is not.

× singing help they to lessen his stress and lessen his job or hmm everyone.

✓ singing helps them to lessen their stress and reduce their workload.

The pronouns 'they' and 'his' are inconsistent. 'They' is plural, so the possessive pronoun should be 'their'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'singing'. 'Lessen his job' is awkward; 'reduce their workload' is clearer.