Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ví dụ minh họa, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời chính xác hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu từ "to" trong "allows me express" và dùng từ đúng như "unwind" thay vì "feel unwind". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn hơn, tránh dài dòng.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely like singing because it allows me to express my emotions and individuality. For instance, when I sing my favorite songs, I feel relaxed and happy, especially after a long day of studying.

Sugerencia: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt, tuy nhiên nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

Ejemplo: Actually, when I was a child, I used to imitate the way my parents sang just for fun. Since singing is a natural human ability, I never took any formal singing lessons.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như "it allow me unwind" nên là "it allows me to unwind". Bạn cũng nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính thức như "uh" và nên dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. For example, at parties, I often go to karaoke rooms with my friends or family because I enjoy sharing fun moments with them. However, when I am at home, I usually sing alone as it allows me to relax.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như "we singing" nên là "we sing", "our individually" nên là "our individuality", và "delighted and distressed" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn nên luyện tập cách dùng từ và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

Ejemplo: Obviously, yes. When we sing, we can share and express our personality, individuality, and especially our emotions. It helps us to relax and feel happy after a hard day of work.

× Yes, I definitely like singing because it allows me express my emotions, personality and individuality.

✓ Yes, I definitely like singing because it allows me to express my emotions, personality and individuality.

The verb 'allows' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to express' rather than the bare verb 'express'. This is a common structure after verbs like 'allow'.

× For example, when a singing my favorite songs, I feel unwind and delighted, especially after a long day of studying hard at school.

✓ For example, when singing my favorite songs, I feel unwound and delighted, especially after a long day of studying hard at school.

The phrase 'when a singing' is incorrect; 'a' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, 'unwind' is a verb, but the sentence needs an adjective to describe the feeling, so 'unwound' is appropriate.

× Actually, when I was a child, I used to imitate the way my parents sang, just for fun.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, I used to imitate the way my parents sang, just for fun.

This sentence is correct in past tense usage; no correction needed.

× Therefore I never took any singing lesson when I was a child.

✓ Therefore, I never took any singing lessons when I was a child.

The phrase 'singing lesson' should be plural 'singing lessons' because it refers to lessons in general. Also, a comma is needed after 'Therefore' for correct punctuation.

× For example, at parties or after parties I often go to the uh karaoke rooms with my friends or maybe my family because I want to enjoy sharing fun moment with them.

✓ For example, at parties or after parties, I often go to karaoke rooms with my friends or maybe my family because I want to enjoy sharing fun moments with them.

A comma is needed after 'after parties' to separate clauses. 'The uh karaoke rooms' should be 'karaoke rooms' without 'the' and 'uh' is filler and should be omitted. 'Fun moment' should be plural 'fun moments' to match the context.

× However, when I at home, I usually sing alone and it allow me unwind.

✓ However, when I am at home, I usually sing alone and it allows me to unwind.

The verb 'allow' must agree with the singular subject 'it', so it should be 'allows'. Also, 'when I at home' is missing the verb 'am'. The phrase 'allow me unwind' should be 'allow me to unwind'.

× Obviously, yes, well, when we singing we we can share, we can express our personality, our individually and especially our emotions.

✓ Obviously, yes, well, when we are singing, we can share, we can express our personality, our individuality and especially our emotions.

The phrase 'when we singing' is missing the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense 'we are singing'. 'Individually' is an adverb but the noun 'individuality' is needed here.

× It it allow our to relax and delighted and distressed after a long day hard working.

✓ It allows us to relax and feel delighted and less distressed after a long day of hard work.

'It it' is a repetition error; only one 'it' is needed. 'Allow' should be 'allows' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Our' should be 'us' as the object pronoun. 'Delighted' and 'distressed' need verbs to connect them properly, so 'feel' is added. 'Hard working' should be 'hard work' as a noun phrase.