Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is quite detailed but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors such as 'let others to understand' (should be 'let others understand').

Ejemplo: I like singing because it helps me relieve stress and express my emotions. Moreover, it's a great way to socialise, so I often sing with my friends at karaoke.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'maintained to go through' and 'I've fried overcome'. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and correct verb forms. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and ensure your answer is coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, learning to sing was challenging, but I persevered and improved a lot. Now, I can sing in tune, and I'm proud of my progress.

Sugerencia: Your answer is heartfelt but contains some awkward expressions like 'dear rest family' and 'let others to feel'. Try to use more natural phrases and avoid overly complex vocabulary that may sound unnatural, such as 'transmission of singing'.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my friends and close family because it allows me to express my true feelings sincerely, and I enjoy sharing emotions through music.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and some redundancy, such as 'this time are the greatest time for for singing'. Try to use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid repeating words. Also, provide a clearer explanation with linking words.

Ejemplo: Definitely. During festivals like Christmas Eve and New Year, singing brings people joy and a sense of belonging, which makes the celebrations more cheerful.

× I like singing because it helps me to relieve my stress and it's also the way for me to express my emotions and let others to understand my personal feelings as well as it's a great activity to interact with my friends.

✓ I like singing because it helps me to relieve my stress and it's also the way for me to express my emotions and let others understand my personal feelings as well as it's a great activity to interact with my friends.

The verb 'let' should be followed directly by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Using 'to understand' after 'let others' is incorrect. The correct form is 'let others understand'. This is a common rule in English where verbs like 'let', 'make', and 'help' are followed by the base verb without 'to'.

× Yes, it's always a tough process to do so, but I still maintained to go through all those obstacles through the process of singing.

✓ Yes, it's always a tough process to do so, but I still managed to go through all those obstacles through the process of singing.

The verb 'maintained' is incorrectly used here. The correct verb is 'managed' when expressing success in doing something difficult. 'Maintain' means to keep or preserve, which does not fit the context. Also, 'managed to go through' is the correct phrase to indicate overcoming obstacles.

× And in fact, I can sing without off pitch right now.

✓ And in fact, I can sing without being off pitch right now.

The phrase 'without off pitch' is incorrect because 'off pitch' is an adjective phrase describing the state of singing. To express the absence of this state, the gerund form 'being' is needed after 'without'. Thus, 'without being off pitch' is correct.

× So I'm really grateful that I've fried overcome those obstacles.

✓ So I'm really grateful that I've finally overcome those obstacles.

The word 'fried' is a typo or incorrect word here. The intended word is likely 'finally', which fits the context of successfully overcoming obstacles. Also, the present perfect tense 'I've finally overcome' is appropriate to express a completed action with present relevance.

× I want to sing for my friend or my dear rest family because I want to express myself authentically and sincerely with my angelic voice, and it's always great to let others to feel your emotions through the transmission of singing.

✓ I want to sing for my friend or my dear rest family because I want to express myself authentically and sincerely with my angelic voice, and it's always great to let others feel your emotions through the transmission of singing.

Similar to the previous 'let' issue, 'let others to feel' is incorrect. The verb 'let' should be followed by the base verb without 'to'. Therefore, 'let others feel' is correct.

× Definitely, since during some festivals like Christmas Eve or Happy New Year, this time are the greatest time for for singing because it makes people feel cheerful and beloved.

✓ Definitely, since during some festivals like Christmas Eve or New Year's, this time is the greatest time for singing because it makes people feel cheerful and beloved.

The subject 'this time' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'for for' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'for'. Additionally, 'Happy New Year' should be 'New Year's' to refer to the festival. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.