Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma thoda grammar ra vocabulary ma sudhar garnu parcha. 'Try to try to spend my time' jasto phrase avoid garnu hola. English ma 'different kind of music' ko sato 'different kinds of music' bhanne thik huncha. Sentence haru lai thap natural ra prabhavshali banau, jasma tapai ko feelings ra karan spashta huncha.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing, although I'm not very skilled at it. I often spend my free time listening to various types of music, such as classical Bollywood songs and Hollywood pop, because they help me feel relaxed and calm.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko uttar ma clarity ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. 'haven't learned or have taken any classes too long singing' jasto phrase confusing cha. Linking words jastai 'however' ya 'but' ko prayog garera sentence haru lai ramro sanga jodne kosis garnu hola.

Ejemplo: Actually, I haven't taken formal singing classes for a long time. However, I do practice in workshops organized by my college's music club to improve my voice and learn to play some musical instruments.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko answer ma grammar ra vocabulary ma thap sudhar garnu parcha. 'there aren't anybody' ko sato 'there isn't anybody' bhanne thik huncha. 'soothing vibes' ko sato 'soothing feeling' ya 'comforting feeling' bhanne ramro huncha. Sentence haru lai thap prabhavshali ra natural banau.

Ejemplo: Honestly, there isn't anyone specific I want to sing for. I enjoy singing for myself because it brings me a soothing feeling. Additionally, I want to develop my artistic talents through singing.

Sugerencia: Tapai ko answer ma grammar ra clarity ma sudhar garnu parcha. 'one of the form' ko sato 'one form' ya 'one of the forms' bhanne thik huncha. 'make people depressed free' ko sato 'help people feel free from depression' bhanne ramro huncha. Sentence haru lai thap natural ra logical banau.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I believe singing is a form of art that helps people relax and feel free from depression. By singing and deeply understanding the lyrics, people can relieve stress and improve their mood.

× I usually try to try to spend my time to listen different kind of music such as classical Bollywood songs or Hollywood pop music because they give me smooth and relaxation vibes.

✓ I usually try to spend my time listening to different kinds of music such as classical Bollywood songs or Hollywood pop music because they give me smooth and relaxing vibes.

The phrase 'try to try to spend my time to listen' is redundant and incorrect. After 'try to', the verb should be in base form, but 'spend my time to listen' is incorrect; it should be 'spend my time listening'. Also, 'different kind of music' should be pluralized to 'different kinds of music' to match plural usage. 'Relaxation vibes' should be 'relaxing vibes' because 'relaxing' is the correct adjective form here.

× Well, frankly speaking, I haven't learned or have taken any classes too long singing, but I have a practice in the workshop organized by the music club of my college to smooth my voice or to learn, uh, some kind of musical instrument.

✓ Well, frankly speaking, I haven't learned or taken any singing classes for a long time, but I have practiced in the workshop organized by the music club of my college to improve my voice or to learn some kind of musical instrument.

The phrase 'have taken any classes too long singing' is incorrect; it should be 'taken any singing classes for a long time' to express duration properly. 'I have a practice' is incorrect; it should be 'I have practiced' to indicate past action. 'To smooth my voice' is better expressed as 'to improve my voice' for clarity.

× To be honest, there aren't anybody to whom I will sing, but I want to sing for myself because I love singing a lot and it gives me a soothing vibes.

✓ To be honest, there isn't anybody to whom I will sing, but I want to sing for myself because I love singing a lot and it gives me soothing vibes.

'There aren't anybody' is incorrect because 'anybody' is singular; it should be 'there isn't anybody'. Also, 'a soothing vibes' is incorrect because 'vibes' is plural; it should be 'soothing vibes' without 'a'.

× I think singing is one of the form of art which helps to relax and make people depressed free.

✓ I think singing is one of the forms of art which helps to relax and make people free from depression.

'One of the form' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the forms' because 'one of' requires a plural noun. 'Make people depressed free' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make people free from depression'.

× It helps to gain consciousness and try to relieve depression from the people by just singing and and deeply involving in understanding of the lyrics.

✓ It helps to gain consciousness and try to relieve depression in people by just singing and deeply involving oneself in understanding the lyrics.

'Relieve depression from the people' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in people'. 'Deeply involving in understanding of the lyrics' is awkward; it should be 'deeply involving oneself in understanding the lyrics' for clarity and correctness.