Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I sings' nên là 'I sing'. Nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I absolutely like singing because it helps me reduce stress. Especially when I sing my favorite songs, I feel relaxed and more confident.

Sugerencia: Cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'I'm not really learn' nên là 'I haven't really learned'. Tránh lặp từ như 'karaoke karaoke' và 'my my'. Câu nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên từ để mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't really learned how to sing, but sometimes I practice singing by using karaoke at home. This helps me improve my voice and enjoy my favorite songs.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp như 'songs that is English' nên là 'English songs'. Nên dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

Ejemplo: If I had to choose one person to sing for, I would definitely sing for my mom. She likes English songs, especially those by Céline Dion, so I want to sing her favorite songs.

Sugerencia: Cần tránh lặp từ như 'uh, uh, and' và lỗi ngữ pháp như 'there will be absolutely happy'. Câu nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên từ để mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Of course, singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and feel comfortable. Moreover, singing can boost confidence and make people feel joyful.

× Yes, I absolutely like singing because when I sings it's uh, some melody or especially my favorite song I feel is reduce stress and it makes me feel relaxed and more confident.

✓ Yes, I absolutely like singing because when I sing it's uh, some melody or especially my favorite song I feel reduces stress and it makes me feel relaxed and more confident.

The verb 'sing' should be in the base form 'sing' after 'when I' because the subject is 'I' which does not take 's' in present tense. Also, 'song I feel is reduce stress' is incorrect; it should be 'song I feel reduces stress' because the subject 'song' is singular and requires the verb 'reduce' to be in third person singular form 'reduces'. This is a third person singular issue.

× No I'm not really learn how to sings but sometimes when I have time I will open the karaoke karaoke to practice my my voice so I can sing more songs that I like.

✓ No, I haven't really learned how to sing but sometimes when I have time I will open the karaoke to practice my voice so I can sing more songs that I like.

The phrase 'I'm not really learn' is incorrect; it should be 'I haven't really learned' to express past experience. Also, 'how to sings' is wrong because after 'to' the verb should be in base form 'sing'. This is a past tense issue and third person singular issue.

× All my favorite one.

✓ All my favorite ones.

The phrase 'All my favorite one' is incorrect because 'all' refers to plural, so 'one' should be pluralized to 'ones'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× If I have to choose a one, one person they have I have to sing for, I would absolutely sing for my mom, umm, especially the songs that is English because uh, my mom like uh, Céline Dion and I want to sing that song for her.

✓ If I have to choose one person to sing for, I would absolutely sing for my mom, especially songs that are in English because my mom likes Céline Dion and I want to sing those songs for her.

The phrase 'a one' is incorrect; 'one' alone is sufficient. 'One person they have I have to sing for' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'one person to sing for'. 'Songs that is English' should be 'songs that are in English' because 'songs' is plural. 'My mom like' should be 'my mom likes' to agree with third person singular. This involves singular and plural issues and third person singular issues.

× especially the songs that is English because uh, my mom like uh, Céline Dion and I want to sing that song for her.

✓ especially songs that are in English because my mom likes Céline Dion and I want to sing those songs for her.

The definite article 'the' before 'songs' is unnecessary here because we are talking about songs in general, not specific ones. Also, 'that song' should be 'those songs' to match plural 'songs'. This is an incorrect use of the definite article.

× Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because it's a good way to relax and feel comfortable and uh, uh, and when you sing, you will feel more confident and there will be absolutely happy.

✓ Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because it's a good way to relax and feel comfortable, and when you sing, you will feel more confident and absolutely happy.

The phrase 'there will be absolutely happy' is incorrect; it should be 'you will be absolutely happy' to correctly refer to the subject 'you'. This is a third person singular issue and sentence structure issue.