Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve grammar, for example, say 'it helps me feel better' instead of 'feel me better'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, such as 'because' and 'so'. Try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me reduce stress and feel better. I often sing with my family or friends, which makes it even more enjoyable. Singing is a great way to relax and take my mind off stressful situations.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and grammar. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use proper tenses, for example, 'when I was young'. Use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas logically. Also, try to be more concise and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, when I was young, I joined my school's music group. They taught us music theory, and I passed the music exam. After that, I was selected for the school band, which was a lot of fun and helped me learn a lot.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows good ideas but needs clearer grammar and structure. Avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your points. For example, say 'My father is a great singer and has always motivated me to sing.' Also, correct phrases like 'make a proud' to 'make him proud'.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my family because my father is a great singer who has always encouraged me. He motivates me by saying I have a beautiful voice, and I want to make him proud by becoming a good singer like him.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good points but needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' to make your answer coherent. Also, try to be more specific and concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness because it helps people divert their minds from stress. When people feel stressed, they often choose to sing or listen to music to relax and feel better.

× Yes, I like singing because it helps to reduce my stress and feel me better.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it helps to reduce my stress and make me feel better.

The phrase 'feel me better' is incorrect because 'feel' is a verb that requires an object and a complement. The correct form is 'make me feel better' where 'make' causes the action and 'feel' is the verb describing the state. Using 'make me feel better' correctly expresses the intended meaning.

× I often sing when I am with my family or friend.

✓ I often sing when I am with my family or friends.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to more than one person or an unspecified number of friends. Using the plural form is appropriate when speaking generally about company or social groups.

× Uh like it is a greater way to divert your mind and get a relaxed when you are in a stress.

✓ Uh, like it is a great way to divert your mind and get relaxed when you are stressed.

The adjective 'greater' is comparative and inappropriate here; 'great' is the correct adjective to describe something positively. Also, 'get a relaxed' is incorrect; 'get relaxed' or 'become relaxed' is correct. 'In a stress' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'stressed' or 'under stress'.

× Yes, when I was youngster, uh, I joined my school group, musician group.

✓ Yes, when I was a youngster, uh, I joined my school group, a musician group.

The noun 'youngster' requires the article 'a' before it. Also, 'musician group' should be preceded by an article 'a' to be grammatically correct. Articles are necessary before singular countable nouns.

× They used to teach us the music and even though I gave the paper for the music and I passed that exam and then they guys selected me in the school band and it was a great fun to learn the music.

✓ They used to teach us music and even though I took the exam for music and I passed it, then the guys selected me for the school band and it was great fun to learn music.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'music' which is an uncountable noun and does not require an article here. 'Gave the paper for the music' is awkward; 'took the exam for music' is more natural. 'Selected me in the school band' should be 'selected me for the school band'. 'A great fun' is incorrect; 'great fun' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.

× I really want to sing for my family as my father was also have interest in the singing.

✓ I really want to sing for my family as my father also has an interest in singing.

The phrase 'was also have' is incorrect; it should be 'also has' to match the present tense and subject-verb agreement. 'The singing' is incorrect; 'singing' as a gerund does not need 'the'. Also, 'interest' is a countable noun here and requires the article 'an'.

× Even though he was a great, he's a great singer.

✓ He was a great singer; he's a great singer.

The phrase 'he was a great' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'he was a great singer'. The sentence is better connected with a semicolon or conjunction to show the contrast or continuation.

× He always motivated me like go for the singing.

✓ He always motivated me by saying, 'Go for singing.'

The phrase 'motivated me like go for the singing' is incorrect. 'Like' is not used to introduce direct speech or commands. The correct way is to say 'motivated me by saying' followed by the command. Also, 'the singing' is incorrect; 'singing' without 'the' is correct.

× Like you can do it.

✓ 'You can do it.'

The word 'Like' at the beginning is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. The sentence should be a direct statement or encouragement without 'Like'.

× You have a pretty voice and I want his.

✓ You have a pretty voice and I want his.

The sentence is unclear. If the speaker means to say 'I want to have his voice,' it should be 'I want his voice.' The original sentence 'I want his' is incomplete and ambiguous.

× I want him to make a proud that I am a good singer like you.

✓ I want him to be proud that I am a good singer like you.

The phrase 'make a proud' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'be proud'. Also, 'like you' is acceptable here to compare the speaker to the person addressed.

× Yes, definitely singing can bring happiness to the people uh, like it is a greater way to divert your mind uh, towards this thinking.

✓ Yes, definitely singing can bring happiness to people; it is a great way to divert your mind from such thoughts.

'A greater way' is incorrect; 'a great way' is correct. 'The people' is unnecessary; 'people' is sufficient. 'Towards this thinking' is awkward; 'from such thoughts' is clearer.

× When people are in a stress, everyone want a relief life so they choose umm singing or a listening music when they guys are too much stressed.

✓ When people are stressed, everyone wants a relief in life, so they choose singing or listening to music when they are very stressed.

'In a stress' is incorrect; 'stressed' is correct. 'Everyone want' should be 'everyone wants' for subject-verb agreement. 'A relief life' is awkward; 'a relief in life' or 'relief in life' is better. 'A listening music' is incorrect; 'listening to music' is correct. 'They guys' is incorrect; 'they' or 'those guys' is correct. 'Too much stressed' should be 'very stressed'.