Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Also, avoid redundancy like "sing song" and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing, although I am not very good yet. I am working hard to improve my voice so that I can perform well like my friends who often sing and organise major events at my university.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like "master at gittering." Try to use correct verb forms and clarify your ideas. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have learned to sing from my best friend Mehdi, who is a professional and well-known singer at my university. I often visit his home where he teaches me singing and encourages me to become a master guitarist as well.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrasing and repetition. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid repeating the same ideas. Use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

Ejemplo: I mainly want to sing for my family and friends because they always inspire and motivate me to improve. Their support is the main reason I strive to become a better singer.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but some sentences are unclear and contain grammatical errors. Try to express your thoughts more clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people feel relaxed and fulfilled inside. Moreover, singing allows individuals to express their unspoken feelings and thoughts.

× I like singing but honestly I am not a good singer but I am trying to improve my vocal so that I can sing well like some of my friends who sing song and organise main events in my university.

✓ I like singing but honestly I am not a good singer. I am trying to improve my vocals so that I can sing well like some of my friends who sing songs and organise main events in my university.

The word 'vocal' should be plural 'vocals' when referring to singing ability. Also, 'sing song' is incorrect; it should be 'sing songs' because 'song' is countable and plural is needed here. Using correct quantifiers helps clarify meaning.

× sometimes I often go to his home and he teach me how to sing and he always influence me to be master at gittering.

✓ sometimes I often go to his home and he teaches me how to sing and he always influences me to be a master at glittering.

The verbs 'teach' and 'influence' need to be in third person singular present tense 'teaches' and 'influences' to agree with the subject 'he'. Also, 'gittering' seems to be a misspelling of 'glittering'. Correct verb forms and spelling improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× he always influence me to be master at gittering.

✓ he always influences me to be a master at glittering.

The phrase 'be master' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'master' to be grammatically correct. Articles are important to specify nouns properly.

× they are the main driving factors that always push me to way better singer.

✓ they are the main driving factors that always push me to be a way better singer.

The phrase 'push me to way better singer' is missing the verb 'be' and the article 'a' before 'way better singer'. Including 'be a' correctly links the verb and noun phrase, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× there there's been a sense of fulfillment in the inner sight of of them.

✓ there is a sense of fulfillment in their inner sight.

The phrase 'there there's been' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'inner sight of of them' is incorrect; it should be 'their inner sight'. Correct use of 'there is' and possessive pronouns improves sentence clarity.