Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
Yes, I like singing because sometimes when I feel sad and I will sing, it's make me really relax.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
No, I'm not the professional singer. I just like sing some very easy popular song that I enjoyed it. That's enough for me.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
I want to sing for my parents and my girlfriend because whenever I have some problems difficulties, they are always behind my back.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
It is depending on what kind of song that the people sing. Some kind of songs, they bring a lot of positive impact and some of them are bringing negative impact.
Do you like singing? Why?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答时语法错误较多,句子结构不够自然,建议注意时态和主谓一致,同时避免重复表达。可以尝试用更地道的表达方式来描述自己的感受。
Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax whenever I feel sad.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题,建议注意冠词使用和动词形式,同时避免冗余。可以用更简洁的句子表达自己的意思。
Ejemplo: No, I'm not a professional singer. I just like to sing simple popular songs for fun.
Who do you want to sing for?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答内容较好,但表达不够准确,'behind my back'用法不当,建议使用更合适的短语如'support me',并注意词汇搭配。
Ejemplo: I want to sing for my parents and my girlfriend because they always support me when I face difficulties.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,建议注意句子结构和时态一致性,同时用更具体的例子来支持观点。
Ejemplo: It depends on the type of song people sing. Some songs can have a positive effect, while others might have a negative impact.
× Yes, I like singing because sometimes when I feel sad and I will sing, it's make me really relax.
✓ Yes, I like singing because sometimes when I feel sad and I sing, it makes me really relaxed.
句中“it's make me really relax”中,主语是第三人称单数“it”,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“makes”,且“relax”应改为形容词“relaxed”来表达感受。
× No, I'm not the professional singer. I just like sing some very easy popular song that I enjoyed it. That's enough for me.
✓ No, I'm not a professional singer. I just like to sing some very easy popular songs that I enjoy. That's enough for me.
“I'm not the professional singer”中,表示职业时应使用不定冠词“a”而非定冠词“the”。“like sing”应改为“like to sing”或“like singing”。“song”应为复数“songs”,因为指多个歌曲。句中“that I enjoyed it”中“it”多余,应去掉。
× I want to sing for my parents and my girlfriend because whenever I have some problems difficulties, they are always behind my back.
✓ I want to sing to my parents and my girlfriend because whenever I have some problems or difficulties, they are always behind me.
“sing for”应改为“sing to”,表示向某人唱歌。短语“problems difficulties”应加连词“or”连接。习惯表达是“behind me”而非“behind my back”。
× It is depending on what kind of song that the people sing. Some kind of songs, they bring a lot of positive impact and some of them are bringing negative impact.
✓ It depends on what kind of songs people sing. Some kinds of songs bring a lot of positive impact and some of them bring negative impact.
“It is depending”应改为“It depends”,因为“depend”是状态动词,不用进行时。句中“kind of song”应为复数“kinds of songs”以匹配后文。去掉多余的“that”和“they”,使句子更简洁。动词时态保持一致,使用一般现在时。