Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Also, use more appropriate vocabulary such as 'I am not a good singer' instead of 'my voice is not as good as of a singer'.

Ejemplo: I don't enjoy singing because I am not a good singer, and others often don't appreciate my voice. However, I love listening to music, especially old songs from the 1990s.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, explain what 'sari gamma' means or use a more general term. Keep your answer within 5 sentences and make it more natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have learned how to sing during my school days. We had special music classes where we practiced singing scales and simple songs. That was the last time I seriously practiced singing.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs better sentence structure and vocabulary. Avoid repetition and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, correct grammatical errors and be specific about your feelings.

Ejemplo: I don't usually sing for others; I sing mainly for myself. When I am happy, I like to sing upbeat songs that lift my mood. Conversely, when I feel sad, I prefer singing slow, emotional songs.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better vocabulary. Avoid repetition and incorrect words like 'Devon'. Use linking words to connect your points logically and be more specific.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is a way to express emotions. For example, singing lively and loud songs often shows that someone is joyful and energetic, while slow, sad songs can express feelings of sadness or depression.

× I don't like singing because uh, when I sing other people don't like me as my voice is not as good as of a singer.

✓ I don't like singing because, uh, when I sing, other people don't like me as my voice is not as good as a singer's.

The phrase 'as good as of a singer' is incorrect. The correct form is 'as good as a singer's' to show possession and comparison properly. The preposition 'of' is unnecessary here and should be omitted.

× But I like to hear songs, especially old ones or the songs which were played during the 90s.

✓ But I like to hear songs, especially old ones or songs that were played during the 90s.

The phrase 'the songs which were played during the 90s' is better expressed as 'songs that were played during the 90s' without the definite article 'the' before 'songs' because it refers to songs in general, not specific ones.

× Yes, I have learned how to sing. During my school days there used to be a lecture for a singing purpose only.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing. During my school days, there used to be a lecture solely for singing purposes.

The phrase 'for a singing purpose only' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'solely for singing purposes' to correctly express the intended meaning using plural 'purposes' and proper preposition usage.

× That's where we used to practice sari gamma for the music.

✓ That's where we used to practice sari gamma in music.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition is 'in' to indicate the context or field in which the practice happened.

× After that I did.

✓ After that, I did not practice singing.

The sentence 'After that I did.' is incomplete and unclear. It lacks an object or complement. Adding 'not practice singing' completes the thought and clarifies the meaning.

× I don't want to sing for anyone or another person.

✓ I don't want to sing for anyone else or another person.

The phrase 'anyone or another person' is redundant. Using 'anyone else' is more natural and grammatically correct in this context.

× I sing when I'm in a mood. I for a when I'm in happy mood.

✓ I sing when I'm in the mood. I sing when I'm in a happy mood.

The sentences are fragmented and contain errors. 'In a mood' should be 'in the mood' to indicate a specific state. The phrase 'I for a when I'm in happy mood' is incomplete and should be corrected to 'I sing when I'm in a happy mood.'

× I used to sing hap songs which makes me feel happy.

✓ I used to sing happy songs which make me feel happy.

The word 'hap' is a typo and should be 'happy'. Also, 'songs which makes' should be 'songs which make' because 'songs' is plural and requires plural verb agreement.

× When I'm in sad mood, I prefer singing slow songs.

✓ When I'm in a sad mood, I prefer singing slow songs.

The phrase 'in sad mood' is missing the article 'a'. It should be 'in a sad mood' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, singing can bring happiness to each other.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to each person.

The phrase 'bring happiness to each other' is incorrect because 'each other' refers to mutual action between two or more people. Here, the intended meaning is that singing brings happiness to individuals, so 'each person' is appropriate.

× People actually singing is a way of ex expressing yourself.

✓ People actually singing is a way of expressing yourself.

The phrase 'ex expressing' is a typo and should be 'expressing'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; it would be better as 'Actually, singing is a way of expressing yourself.' However, per instructions, only grammar mistakes are corrected.

× People singing happy songs or songs which are loud, it shows that they are active, they are happy and when people sing sad songs or slow songs it's usually expressed that they are depressed or Devon.

✓ When people sing happy songs or songs which are loud, it shows that they are active and happy. When people sing sad songs or slow songs, it usually expresses that they are depressed or down.

The original sentence is a run-on and confusing. It needs to be split into two sentences for clarity. Also, 'Devon' is a typo and should be 'down'. The phrase 'it's usually expressed that' is awkward and corrected to 'it usually expresses that'.