Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ không chính xác, ví dụ như 'I'm really enjoy' nên là 'I really enjoy'. Bạn cũng nên tránh mâu thuẫn trong câu (nói thích hát nhưng lại không giỏi và ngại hát). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my feelings. However, I sometimes feel shy singing in front of others, so I usually sing alone at home. For example, I like to sing my favorite songs when I am stressed because it cheers me up.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'I had' nên là 'Yes, I have' hoặc 'Yes, I did'. Câu trả lời thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh và có câu không rõ nghĩa như 'Singing not only allowed me to express my emotion but also significantly.' Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school because I wanted to join a singing competition. During that time, I received basic vocal training which helped me understand rhythm and lyrics better. Singing not only allowed me to express my emotions but also boosted my confidence.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp như 'families' nên là 'family' và 'feel' nên là 'feels'. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý hơn.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because it feels more personal and meaningful. They know me well and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to improve. Moreover, their support encourages me to enjoy singing even more.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'individual' nên là 'individuals' hoặc 'a person', 'can even uplifting' nên là 'can be uplifting'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và bổ sung thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. It allows individuals to express their emotions and can be uplifting, especially when singing in a group. For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed when they sing their favorite songs, which helps improve their mood.

× I'm really enjoy singing because I'm not good at it.

✓ I really enjoy singing because I'm not good at it.

The verb 'enjoy' should be in the base form after 'I'm' (I am) to form the present continuous tense correctly. 'I'm enjoy' is incorrect; it should be 'I enjoy' or 'I'm enjoying'. Here, simple present 'I enjoy' fits better.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I have.

The question uses present perfect 'Have you ever learnt', so the answer should also be in present perfect tense 'I have', not past simple 'I had'.

× I learned how to sing when I was in primary school because I want to participate in a singing competition.

✓ I learned how to sing when I was in primary school because I wanted to participate in a singing competition.

The main clause is in past tense 'learned', so the reason clause should also be in past tense 'wanted' to maintain tense consistency.

× During that time, I received the basic vocal training which helped me understand about rhythm and lyrics.

✓ During that time, I received basic vocal training which helped me understand rhythm and lyrics.

The verb 'understand' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'the basic vocal training' is better as 'basic vocal training' without 'the' here.

× Singing not only allowed me to express my emotion but also significantly.

✓ Singing not only allowed me to express my emotions but also helped me significantly.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb after 'but also'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context.

× I would like to sing for my families or close friends.

✓ I would like to sing for my family or close friends.

'Family' is usually uncountable or singular collective noun; 'families' is plural and less common in this context.

× Singing for them feel more personal and meaning because they know me well and appreciate my efforts.

✓ Singing for them feels more personal and meaningful because they know me well and appreciate my efforts.

The subject 'Singing' is singular, so the verb should be 'feels'. Also, 'meaning' should be the adjective 'meaningful'.

× Moreover, this support and encouragement motivated me to improve and enjoy the experience even more.

✓ Moreover, this support and encouragement motivate me to improve and enjoy the experience even more.

The sentence refers to ongoing motivation, so present tense 'motivate' fits better than past tense 'motivated'.

× Singing allows individual to express the emotion and can even uplifting especially when done with others in the group.

✓ Singing allows individuals to express emotions and can even be uplifting especially when done with others in the group.

'Individual' should be plural 'individuals' to match general statement. 'The emotion' should be plural 'emotions'. 'Can even uplifting' is incorrect; it should be 'can even be uplifting'.

× For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed when they sing their favorite song which help improve their mood.

✓ For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed when they sing their favorite songs which help improve their mood.

'Song' should be plural 'songs' to agree with 'many people'. 'Help' is correct as plural verb matching 'songs'.