Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'like' and clarify your points with better sentence structure. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing in my free time because it helps me relax after studying or attending classes. I often sing my favourite songs to unwind and refresh my mind.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using clearer sentence structures. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific details about what you learned.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing at school where our music teacher taught us about singing and musical instruments. During those classes, I gained basic skills in singing songs.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows emotion but is affected by repetition and unclear phrasing. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking words to organise your ideas better. Also, clarify who 'she' refers to for better understanding.

Ejemplo: If I get a chance to sing, I would sing for my loved ones, especially my mother, because she is very close to my heart and has always supported me. I often sing to cheer her up when she feels bored or faces difficulties.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and repetitions. Improve your sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas clearly. Be more specific about how singing brings happiness.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, singing can bring happiness because many people enjoy listening to songs that resonate with their feelings, especially during difficult times. Such songs help them feel relaxed and uplifted.

× Yes, I like singing because in my leisure time I always like to sing this song which I prefer to listen whenever I got free from my institute or whenever I get tired from my studies.

✓ Yes, I like singing because in my leisure time I always like to sing this song which I prefer to listen to whenever I get free from my institute or whenever I get tired from my studies.

The sentence mixes past tense 'got' with present tense context. Since the sentence talks about habitual actions, present tense 'get' should be used consistently. Also, the verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object, so 'listen to' is correct.

× Oh yes, I have learned how to sing because when I was in my school there was a class teacher which always taught us about the music and the and the instruments.

✓ Oh yes, I have learned how to sing because when I was in my school there was a class teacher who always taught us about music and the instruments.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used for people; 'who' should be used instead. Also, 'the music' is incorrect here because 'music' is uncountable and does not need 'the' in this context. The repeated 'and the' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× At that time I had learned a little bit about how to sing a song.

✓ At that time I learned a little bit about how to sing a song.

The past perfect tense 'had learned' is unnecessary here because the sentence simply refers to a past event without another past event before it. Simple past 'learned' is appropriate.

× Well if I ever get a chance to sing for I would definitely sing for my loved ones because because she's very close to my heart and always helped me in my problems.

✓ Well, if I ever get a chance to sing, I would definitely sing for my loved ones because they are very close to my heart and always help me with my problems.

The sentence is missing the object after 'sing for' initially, making it incomplete. Also, 'she's' is incorrect if referring to multiple loved ones; 'they are' is appropriate. The verb tense 'helped' should be present tense 'help' to indicate ongoing support. The repeated 'because' is redundant and should be removed.

× I always sing for her whenever she get she get bored or she get or she got some kind of problem so I always like to sing for her.

✓ I always sing for her whenever she gets bored or she has some kind of problem, so I always like to sing for her.

The verb 'get' should be in third person singular present tense 'gets' to agree with 'she'. The phrase 'she get or she got' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'she has'. Also, the sentence is run-on and needs proper punctuation.

× In my opinion, singing and bringing happiness to people because most of the people like to listen to songs which which are really close to their heart in their failure or in their bad times.

✓ In my opinion, singing brings happiness to people because most people like to listen to songs that are really close to their hearts during their failures or bad times.

The sentence lacks a main verb after 'singing' and is incomplete. 'Singing brings happiness' is correct. The repeated 'which' is redundant. 'Their heart' should be plural 'their hearts' to agree with 'most people'. 'In their failure or in their bad times' is better expressed as 'during their failures or bad times'.

× Most of the people in my country like to uh, like to listen the songs which can make them them happy and make them feel relaxed.

✓ Most people in my country like to listen to songs that can make them happy and feel relaxed.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object, so 'listen to songs' is correct. The repeated 'them' is redundant and should be removed. 'Which' is better replaced by 'that' in defining clauses. 'Most of the people' can be simplified to 'Most people'.