Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và câu hơi dài, nên chia nhỏ câu để dễ hiểu hơn. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và tránh lỗi số nhiều (voice are -> voice is).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing very much, especially when I am taking a shower. Although my voice is not very good, I find singing a great way to relax and improve my mood.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'I just singing' nên là 'I just sing'. Câu trả lời hơi lặp lại và chưa có liên kết rõ ràng giữa các ý. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

Ejemplo: Although I love singing, I have never taken professional training because I don't want to be a singer. Instead, I usually sing with my friends or family just for fun and to relax.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng, ví dụ 'I enjoyed seeing karaoke' nên là 'I enjoy going to karaoke'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I like to sing for my friends when we go to karaoke during holidays. We choose our favorite songs and enjoy singing together, which creates a joyful and relaxing atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng dùng từ sai nghĩa như 'afflict' (gây đau đớn) thay vì 'affect' (ảnh hưởng). Hãy chú ý chọn từ phù hợp và mở rộng câu trả lời với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can positively affect people's mood and help create strong bonds. For example, when I sing my favorite songs, I feel less stressed and more cheerful.

× Although my voice are terrible but I think it is a great way to relax and unwind and it can lift my mood too.

✓ Although my voice is terrible, I think it is a great way to relax and unwind and it can lift my mood too.

The subject 'voice' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'but' is unnecessary after 'although' and should be removed for correct sentence structure.

× Although I love singing, I've never thought about taking a professional training because my dream job is not singer.

✓ Although I love singing, I've never thought about taking professional training because my dream job is not to be a singer.

The phrase 'a professional training' is incorrect because 'training' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article. Also, 'not singer' should be 'not to be a singer' to correctly express the idea.

× I just singing with my friends or my family.

✓ I just sing with my friends or my family.

After 'just', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. 'I just sing' is correct.

× Just a way to lift my mood and relax, just for entertainment, not to be a professional singer.

✓ It is just a way to lift my mood and relax, just for entertainment, not to be a professional singer.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it a sentence fragment. Adding 'It is' completes the sentence structure.

× I enjoyed seeing karaoke with my friends on holiday.

✓ I enjoy singing karaoke with my friends on holiday.

The phrase 'seeing karaoke' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'singing karaoke'. Also, 'enjoyed' suggests past tense, but the context implies a habitual action, so 'enjoy' is better.

× We go to a shopping mall going to a box karaoke and choose our favorite songs and join to eat.

✓ We go to a shopping mall, go to a karaoke box, choose our favorite songs, and eat together.

The phrase 'going to a box karaoke' is awkward and incorrect. 'Go to a karaoke box' is correct. Also, 'join to eat' is incorrect; 'eat together' or 'join in eating' is better.

× It is a great way for us to make our day and great a joyful atmosphere.

✓ It is a great way for us to make our day and create a joyful atmosphere.

The phrase 'great a joyful atmosphere' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'create' to express making an atmosphere.

× Singing with them helps me relax and why too.

✓ Singing with them helps me relax and feel happy too.

The phrase 'and why too' is incorrect and unclear. It should be replaced with 'and feel happy too' to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, I believe singing can afflict people's mood and create strong bond among them.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can affect people's mood and create a strong bond among them.

The verb 'afflict' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'affect'. Also, 'strong bond' needs the article 'a' before it.