Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như chia động từ sai và sử dụng từ ngữ phù hợp hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax during my free time. For example, I often sing alone or for my parents, which makes me feel happy and connected to them.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như chia động từ sai. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích rõ hơn về cách bạn học hát. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: No, I have never taken any singing classes. Instead, I prefer to learn singing by myself through practice and listening to songs.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my music teacher from primary school because she inspired me a lot. Even though I am now in high school, I still remember her kindness and support.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ quan điểm của bạn.

Ejemplo: I believe singing can bring happiness to many people, including me. However, others might find joy in activities like playing sports or musical instruments such as the guitar or piano.

× Actually I love singing and when I have leisure times or any time I don't do someone, I will sings for my parent and sitting alone and I consider singing is a part of our line of my life.

✓ Actually I love singing and when I have leisure time or any time I don't do something, I will sing for my parents and sit alone and I consider singing is a part of the line of my life.

The word 'leisure times' should be 'leisure time' because 'time' is uncountable here. 'Do someone' is incorrect; it should be 'do something' to indicate an activity. 'Sings' should be 'sing' because after 'will' the base form of the verb is used. 'Parent' should be plural 'parents' to refer to both or more than one parent. 'Sitting' should be 'sit' to maintain parallel verb structure after 'will'. 'Our line of my life' is confusing; 'the line of my life' is more appropriate.

× Actually, I haven't ever learned how to sings through or extra classes or someone's.

✓ Actually, I haven't ever learned how to sing through extra classes or from someone.

'Sings' is incorrect after 'how to'; the base form 'sing' should be used. 'Or extra classes or someone's' is unclear; it should be 'through extra classes or from someone' to indicate learning sources.

× I choose things alone and by myself.

✓ I choose things alone and by myself.

This sentence is grammatically correct but could be improved for clarity. No singular/plural error here.

× Actually is a person who I want to sing for uh, I would say my teachers.

✓ Actually, there is a person who I want to sing for, uh, I would say my teacher.

'Teachers' should be singular 'teacher' because the sentence refers to one person. Also, the sentence is missing 'there' to form 'there is'.

× Actually is a person who I want to sing for uh, I would say my teachers.

✓ Actually, there is a person who I want to sing for, uh, I would say my teacher.

The sentence is missing the existential 'there' before 'is' to indicate existence.

× She is a musics teachers.

✓ She is a music teacher.

'Musics' is incorrect; 'music' is uncountable and singular. 'Teachers' should be singular 'teacher' to agree with 'she is'.

× She is umm this primary school.

✓ She is at this primary school.

The preposition 'at' is needed to indicate location.

× So now I am a student at high school.

✓ So now I am a student at high school.

This sentence is correct in present tense.

× I want to talk with her because her very.

✓ I want to talk with her because she is very kind.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a predicate after 'because her very'. It needs a verb and adjective to complete the thought.

× Well, I think it's depends, uh, we miss singing can bring happiness for me.

✓ Well, I think it depends, uh, we miss singing can bring happiness to me.

'It's depends' is incorrect; it should be 'it depends' without 'is'. 'For me' is better expressed as 'to me' when talking about bringing happiness.

× So someone else, uh, thinks, uh, do sport or play some guitar, play some guitar.

✓ So someone else, uh, thinks, uh, doing sport or playing the guitar.

'Do sport' should be 'doing sport' or 'playing sports'. 'Play some guitar' should be 'playing the guitar' for correct usage.

× Piano will brings happiness and joy for them and I consider.

✓ Piano will bring happiness and joy to them and I consider it so.

'Brings' should be 'bring' after 'will'. 'Piano' should be preceded by 'the' if referring to the instrument generally. 'For them' is better as 'to them'. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'it so' clarifies the meaning.