Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构不够自然，有语法错误，如“very great way”应改为“a great way”，“I am very fear”应改为“I am very afraid”。建议简化句子，避免重复表达，并注意语法准确性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my feelings. However, I am sometimes afraid to sing in front of others because I think my voice is not very good.

Sugerencia: 回答中“singing license”用词不准确，应该用“singing lessons”或“singing classes”。句子较长且重复，建议简洁表达原因，并使用正确词汇。

Ejemplo: No, I haven't learned how to sing because singing lessons are too expensive for me.

Sugerencia: 回答中“girlfriends”应为单数“girlfriend”，且“very ideal”表达不自然。建议使用更地道的表达，如“a good way”。另外，句子结构可以更简洁流畅。

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my girlfriend because singing is a good way to express my feelings. For example, I can sing romantic songs to show my love.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误，如“Is depends”应为“It depends”，“inevitable skill”用词不当，应为“natural skill”或“good skill”。表达不够清晰，建议简化句子并使用正确语法。

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. If someone has a good voice and singing skills, their singing can make people happy. But if someone sings badly, it might make people uncomfortable.

× Yes, I am really keen on singing because it is a very great way to unwind and express myself which will let me feel happiness.

✓ Yes, I am really keen on singing because it is a great way to unwind and express myself, which makes me feel happy.

这里“which will let me feel happiness”表达不自然，应该用“which makes me feel happy”更符合英语习惯，动词用makes而非will let，且happy用作形容词更合适。

× However, I may be scared of singing due to I have a terrible voice so I am very fear to sing to another people.

✓ However, I may be scared of singing because I have a terrible voice, so I am very afraid to sing to other people.

“due to”后面应接名词短语，不能直接接句子，改为“because”更合适；“fear”是名词，形容词应为“afraid”；“another people”错误，people是复数，前面应用“other people”。

× No, I haven't learned how to sing.

✓ No, I haven't learnt how to sing.

“learned”和“learnt”都是过去分词，英式英语中“learnt”更常用，保持时态正确即可。此处无明显错误，保持原句。

× The reason is that I can't cover the cost of the singing license, which is so expensive for me, so I don't have the chance to learn how to sing.

✓ The reason is that I can't cover the cost of the singing license, which is too expensive for me, so I don't have the chance to learn how to sing.

“so expensive”表达不准确，应该用“too expensive”表示“太贵了”，更符合语境。

× I want to sing for my girlfriends because, as I mentioned earlier, singing is a very ideal way to express my emotions.

✓ I want to sing for my girlfriend because, as I mentioned earlier, singing is a very ideal way to express my emotions.

“girlfriends”是复数，语境中应指单数“girlfriend”，保持主谓一致。

× For instance, I can sing some romantic songs to show my love with her.

✓ For instance, I can sing some romantic songs to show my love for her.

“show my love with her”中介词用错，正确搭配是“show my love for her”，表示“对她的爱”。

× Is depends on different situations.

✓ It depends on different situations.

句子缺少主语，应加“It”作为形式主语，构成完整句子。

× If some people have a very fantastic voice and inevitable skill of singing, they will let people feel happiness.

✓ If some people have a very fantastic voice and inevitable singing skills, they will make people feel happy.

“inevitable skill”用词错误，应为“inevitable singing skills”或“inevitable skill”不合适，且“let people feel happiness”表达不自然，改为“make people feel happy”。

× However, if somebody have a terrible song, terrible voice, maybe some people will scare for this.

✓ However, if somebody has a terrible song and terrible voice, maybe some people will be scared by this.

“somebody”是单数，谓语动词应用“has”；“will scare for this”表达错误，正确应为“will be scared by this”，被动语态表达感受。