Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer has several grammar and vocabulary errors, and the word 'thinking' is mistakenly used instead of 'singing'. To improve, focus on using correct vocabulary and grammar, and keep your answer clear and concise. For example, directly state your opinion and give a reason without redundancy.

Ejemplo: I don't really like singing because I think my voice sounds unpleasant. Therefore, I prefer listening to others sing rather than singing myself.

Sugerencia: There are vocabulary mistakes and unclear phrases, such as 'lessons of thinking' instead of 'singing lessons'. Also, the sentence 'and I did' is incomplete and confusing. To improve, use correct vocabulary and complete sentences, and provide clear reasons.

Ejemplo: No, I have never taken any singing lessons because it wasn't popular at my school. Also, I was very busy preparing for my exams, so I didn't have time.

Sugerencia: Again, the word 'think' is incorrectly used instead of 'sing'. The sentences are unclear and contain grammar errors. To improve, use the correct vocabulary and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would like to sing for many people. I want to perform on stage and share my songs to connect with the audience.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains vocabulary mistakes, such as 'thinking' instead of 'singing'. Also, the last sentence is confusing. To improve, give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples, using appropriate linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music is a form of art that can express emotions and uplift moods.

× I can't say that I'm fan of thinking because I think my voice is kinda dirty and I'm don't sound good, that's why I don't think at all and I prefer more to listening. Help other people think.

✓ I can't say that I'm a fan of singing because I think my voice is kinda dirty and I don't sound good, that's why I don't sing at all and I prefer listening more. I help other people sing.

The pronoun 'I'm' followed by 'don't' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't'. Also, 'fan of thinking' should be 'fan of singing'. The phrase 'prefer more to listening' is awkward; it should be 'prefer listening more'. The sentence 'Help other people think' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'I help other people sing' to make sense in context.

× No, I have never taken any lessons of thinking because in my school it wasn't popular and I did. Also, I didn't have any time for it because I was really involved in preparing for my exams.

✓ No, I have never taken any singing lessons because in my school it wasn't popular and I didn't. Also, I didn't have any time for it because I was really involved in preparing for my exams.

The phrase 'lessons of thinking' should be 'singing lessons'. The phrase 'and I did' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'and I didn't' to match the negative context. The rest of the sentence is correct in past tense.

× If I had a chance, I really would like to think for lots of people. I want to perform on the stage and think some of my songs and connect people using by using them.

✓ If I had a chance, I would really like to sing for lots of people. I want to perform on stage and sing some of my songs and connect people by using them.

The verb 'think' is incorrectly used instead of 'sing'. The phrase 'perform on the stage' is better as 'perform on stage'. The phrase 'connect people using by using them' is redundant and awkward; corrected to 'connect people by using them'.

× Yes, of course it can, because thinking it is kind of hard and every kind of art can bring happiness to people. It depends on what kind of it is it like something like that?

✓ Yes, of course it can, because singing is kind of hard and every kind of art can bring happiness to people. It depends on what kind of art it is, something like that.

The word 'thinking' is incorrectly used instead of 'singing'. The phrase 'what kind of it is it like something like that?' is awkward and unclear; corrected to 'what kind of art it is, something like that' for clarity.