Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing sometimes, especially when I feel stressed or depressed because it helps me relax and brings me peace of mind.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and try to be more concise.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't had formal singing lessons, but I have watched many videos by vocal coaches, which have helped me improve my singing skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid starting sentences with 'Because' and try to express your ideas more clearly and directly.

Ejemplo: I don't like singing for others; I sing mainly to relax and clear my mind when I'm stressed, which also helps me concentrate better at work.

Sugerencia: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas logically and use correct vocabulary and sentence structures.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. However, some electronic songs with loud beats might have the opposite effect, while softer music tends to be more uplifting.

× Yes, sometimes I like singing when I feels like I am depressed and feeling stressed.

✓ Yes, sometimes I like singing when I feel like I am depressed and feeling stressed.

The verb 'feel' should agree with the subject 'I'. Since 'I' is first person singular, the correct form is 'feel' not 'feels'. 'Feels' is used with third person singular subjects.

× Then I like to sing music because it makes me feel relaxed and allows me to have a Peace of Mind.

✓ Then I like to sing music because it makes me feel relaxed and allows me to have peace of mind.

'Peace of mind' is an uncountable noun phrase and should not be capitalised or preceded by the definite article 'a'. The phrase should be in lowercase and without 'a'.

× No, I haven't learned it formally to sing, but I have seen many videos of different teachers and vocal cord coaches that help you learn to sing and improve your vocal cords and that helped me a lot to improve my singing.

✓ No, I haven't learned to sing formally, but I have seen many videos of different teachers and vocal cord coaches that help you learn to sing and improve your vocal cords, and that has helped me a lot to improve my singing.

The phrase 'learned it formally to sing' is awkward; 'learned to sing formally' is correct. Also, the verb tense in 'that helped me' should be present perfect 'has helped me' to match the ongoing relevance. A comma is added before 'and' to separate clauses.

× No, I don't like to sing for anyone, I just learned it so I can gain a piece of mind when I feel stressed and depressed.

✓ No, I don't like to sing for anyone, I just learned it so I can gain peace of mind when I feel stressed and depressed.

The phrase 'a piece of mind' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'peace of mind' without an article.

× Because it helps you a lot to help to gain focus and try to help you improve your working performance.

✓ Because it helps me a lot to gain focus and improve my work performance.

The pronouns should be consistent with the speaker 'I' and 'me', not 'you'. Also, 'working performance' is better expressed as 'work performance'. The sentence is simplified for clarity.

× Yes I think singing helps a lot in bringing people happiness but some songs are very high boosted and very most of them are electronic that instead of making you happy makes you depressed.

✓ Yes, I think singing helps a lot in bringing people happiness, but some songs are very high-pitched and most of them are electronic, which instead of making you happy, make you depressed.

The sentence has several issues: missing commas, awkward phrasing 'very high boosted' should be 'very high-pitched', 'very most of them' is incorrect and should be 'most of them', and the relative clause needs correction for subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× Wear lighter musics are very.

✓ Lighter music is better.

'Wear lighter musics are very' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Music' is uncountable and does not have a plural form 'musics'. The sentence is corrected to a clear comparative statement.