Singing— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
I don't like singing, I don't have the best vocals for that. My voice is horrible, scratchy. Kind of annoying even to my ears.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
I have never taken classes on singing, I just knew from my own that I had don't have the talent for it, so I chose not to waste time on it. Well, just that simple for me.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
If I am forced to sing for somebody, it would probably be to my children, maybe wife. That's about it. I would be way too shy to sing in front of anybody else. Like I said, I don't have the talent for it.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
I do think singing can bring happiness to people. In fact, we see it every day when people listen to music. When they're upset, they listen to music uplift themselves. When they're feeling tired or pressured, they listen to music to give them the boost, the energy, the self-confidence to put.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Svarene dine er ærlige, men prøv å gjøre dem mer naturlige og flytende ved å unngå gjentakelser og bruke mer varierte uttrykk. For eksempel, i stedet for å si "I don't have the best vocals" og "My voice is horrible", kan du bruke ett klart uttrykk som beskriver stemmen din. Hold svaret innen fem setninger og unngå å gjenta samme informasjon.
Ejemplo: No, I don't enjoy singing because I feel my voice is quite rough and not very pleasant to listen to. Therefore, I usually avoid singing in public or even at home.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: Prøv å gjøre svaret mer strukturert og naturlig ved å bruke en klar hovedsetning og deretter støtteinformasjon. Unngå grammatiske feil som "had don't have". Bruk sammenhengsord for å gjøre svaret mer flytende.
Ejemplo: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I realized early on that I lack the talent. Therefore, I decided it would be better to focus on other interests instead.
Who do you want to sing for?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: Svaret ditt er klart, men kan forbedres ved å bruke mer naturlige uttrykk og sammenhengsord for å binde setningene sammen. Unngå å gjenta tidligere informasjon unødvendig. Hold svaret innen fem setninger.
Ejemplo: If I had to sing for someone, it would probably be my children or my wife because I feel comfortable with them. Otherwise, I am too shy to sing in front of others since I don't consider myself talented.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Puntuación: 80.0Sugerencia: Svaret ditt er godt, men kan forbedres ved å bruke mer presise og naturlige uttrykk. For eksempel, unngå ufullstendige setninger som "to put" og bruk sammenhengsord for bedre flyt. Vær spesifikk og unngå gjentakelser.
Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when someone feels upset or stressed, listening to uplifting songs can boost their mood and energy, helping them feel more confident and positive.
Gramática
× When they're upset, they listen to music uplift themselves.
✓ When they're upset, they listen to music to uplift themselves.
The verb 'uplift' needs the preposition 'to' before it to correctly express purpose. Without 'to', the sentence is grammatically incorrect. Adding 'to' clarifies that listening to music is done in order to uplift themselves.
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