Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำและข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ เช่น การใช้ 'I I' และ 'singing is made me comfortable' ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้ลื่นไหล และควรจำกัดคำตอบไม่เกิน 5 ประโยค

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing even though my voice is not perfect. Singing makes me feel relaxed and happy. Moreover, it helps me practice my English pronunciation, which is very useful for me.

Sugerencia: ควรตอบให้ตรงประเด็นและใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจน เช่น การใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยค และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ เช่น 'to to' และคำที่ไม่จำเป็น เช่น 'you know' ควรจำกัดคำตอบไม่เกิน 5 ประโยค

Ejemplo: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I practice singing by myself every day. Although I don't have much time for lessons, I believe daily practice helps me improve my skills.

Sugerencia: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น หลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ เช่น 'I'm, I'm' และคำที่ไม่จำเป็น เช่น 'you know' ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด และควรจำกัดคำตอบไม่เกิน 5 ประโยค

Ejemplo: Since I was a child, I have dreamed of becoming a singer. If I achieve this dream, I would love to perform for my audience and share my songs with them. It would be an amazing experience because I really enjoy singing.

Sugerencia: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์ หลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำและข้อผิดพลาด เช่น 'it's really make me' ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด และควรจำกัดคำตอบไม่เกิน 5 ประโยค

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. For example, when I listen to my favorite artist's songs, I feel very happy and relaxed. Additionally, it helps me learn new things.

× I really like singing and I I think I have a not that good voice, but it's good for me though and singing is made me comfortable and I really love to sing because sometimes it helps me practicing my English because about like pronunciation, something like that is really helpful.

✓ I really like singing and I think I do not have a very good voice, but it's good enough for me. Singing makes me feel comfortable and I really love to sing because sometimes it helps me practice my English, especially pronunciation, which is really helpful.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and tense usage such as 'singing is made me comfortable' which should be 'singing makes me feel comfortable' to correctly express present habitual action. Also, 'helps me practicing' should be 'helps me practice' because after 'help' the base form of the verb is used. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I never learned how to sing but I'm trying by myself to to sing every day and every song I like but I just don't have time for learning singing.

✓ I have never learned how to sing but I'm trying by myself to sing every day and every song I like, but I just don't have time to learn singing.

The sentence uses 'never learned' which is acceptable in American English but 'have never learned' is more appropriate to indicate experience up to now. Also, 'for learning singing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to learn singing' because 'time to do something' is the correct structure. These changes correct tense and infinitive usage.

× But I'm just like practicing with myself, you know? Singing every day can help you improve.

✓ But I just like practicing by myself, you know? Singing every day can help you improve.

The phrase 'practicing with myself' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'by myself' to indicate doing something alone. This is a prepositional error related to present tense habitual action.

× If I can achieve that dream something and someday I want to sing for my audience, my listener, to hear my song.

✓ If I can achieve that dream someday, I want to sing for my audience, my listeners, to hear my songs.

The word 'listener' should be plural 'listeners' because 'audience' refers to a group, so the plural form is appropriate. Also, 'song' should be plural 'songs' to match the context of multiple songs. This corrects singular/plural agreement.

× If I can do something like that, it's really amazing for me because I'm, I'm really like singing very much.

✓ If I can do something like that, it would be really amazing for me because I really like singing very much.

The phrase 'I'm really like singing' is incorrect; it should be 'I really like singing' to express present preference. Also, 'it's really amazing' is better as 'it would be really amazing' to express a hypothetical future event. This corrects tense and verb usage.

× Yes I think singing can bring happiness especially for me because I have my favorite artist and I when I listen to her song it's really make me feel very happy and also it helped me relax every time I listen to her song and it's help for me learning new things.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness, especially for me because I have my favorite artist and when I listen to her songs, it really makes me feel very happy. Also, it helps me relax every time I listen to her songs and it helps me learn new things.

The sentence has several tense and subject-verb agreement errors: 'it's really make' should be 'it really makes' to agree with singular subject; 'helped me relax' should be 'helps me relax' to maintain present tense; 'it's help for me learning' should be 'it helps me learn' for correct verb form and tense. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.